A great story. Very good.

Awesome characterization of Jack and insight into his mind. All the little thought parts were very entertaining.

I liked it a lot. Good job!

WAHH! That was so good! I love Jack Sparrow (forgive me, CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow) so very, very much! Interesting point you're pushing there, that he intended to go down with the ship anyway. Now we have to wait until the third movie comes out, dangit.

Great fic! :)

Hey, I loved the story on the last thoughts of Captain Jack Sparrow, u got his attitude right on! My fav. part was the very last sentence;
Congratulations, Davey. You will always remember this as the day that you finally caught Captain Jack Sparrow.

I was crying, I'm pathetic!

lol, anyways, great job on it!
~Crystal

"I'm going to sting all the bloody way down." Um, BRILLIANT. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. -faves-

What a fantastic story, I could actually imagine all this as I read it and how very typical of Captain Jack! Job well done matey!

Aww... That's sad O_O I didn't much like how quickly the ending came up... It wasn't bad, but it would've been better if it came sooner... I also like how Jack refers to Elizabeth in this... If you don't think about why he's saying some of that, sounds like he could be talking about a sister or a daughter or something... Anyway, it's good. Very Jack ^_^

Aww, I love this. You portrayed Jack wondefully, thoughts and all and I absolutally adore the last line.

"Congratulations, Davey. You will always remember this as the day that you finally caught Captain Jack Sparrow."

Once more, beautiful, even if I do think Elizabeth is a lying wretch who deserves nothing less then keel hauling for betraying Will and trying to murder Jack.

He obviously intended to stay anyways, and the rest of the crew was willing enough to remain with him if he had wanted.

So I don't really agree on Jack's opinion of her, but I can hear him actually thinking it in my head.

Lovely job!

oh...

JACK!

i love this. i've seen the movie twice and am now apparently trying to read every DMC ffic out there.

but i like this one :)

Well written, beautifully characterized. I agree that Jack would probably stay with his ship. After all, he did spend 10 years trying to get her back and who knows what else before PotC 1. Sigh. Beautiful...

excellent job

HAHAH! A good show. Would have been a funny ending but we all know Barbosa is going to bring Jack back. HOHOHEEHEE!

Hm. Surprisingly well written, and I like your characterization of Jack. I'm incredibly fond of the idea that he would have stuck with the pearl to hell or high water - in fact, I'd really like to see more of your pirates fanfiction. Please tell me this isn't a one time thing?
(by the way, when i say "surprisingly," i mean "surprisingly for not you personally. O_o)

"Will, you savvy pirate, you. You’d better take care of Elizabeth, and cherish her. She’s put herself through all kinds of hell to find you, so if you don’t make her happy, I’ll commandeer Davey Jones’ ship myself and hunt you down, boy."

I loved that. This is amazingly a lot like what Jack would think as he went inside the beast. It is a good idea. You've captured the spirit of Jack Sparrow and put it into words. Great job!