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| SilverLight05 2006-07-27 ch 3,  | abuseAww! Why did Rhoslyn have to think that thought? But I, too, wonder if Nen kisses the other nymphs, or any other beautiful creature for that matter, like he did with her? And Orieus coming out to seek Hafwen? Ooh! LOL, please update soon!! ~SL05 |
| Reepicheepet 2006-07-27 ch 3, | abuseHey! Nice chapter. I love the part about Orius and Hafen. What happened to Zyllie, haven't heard from you her in a while. Keep writing. Have fun. Eat lots of chocolate. |
| a certain slant of light 2006-07-27 ch 2, | abuse"“I still do not see the purpose of fighting.” she said, snidely." That's such a redundant question. If I were Hafwen, I'd be like "Then why did you join the goddamn ARMY, genius?" Also, I like the "You think he's handsome!" "It's hard not to!" |
| a certain slant of light 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseUm, tiny, eensy weensy little detail: there's no such thing as male nymphs. They are all female, and mate with river gods, fauns, human men, the like, but according to history, there are no male nymphs. Just making sure you know, that shouldn't stop you from having them in your story. I like the names, they're very appropriate for the setting. :) |
| SilverLight05 2006-07-22 ch 2, | abuseLOL, Poor Rhoslyn! I could just see her face when Nen dove into the water. And you could tell that she likes him! And Hafwen, too! LOL, I could see her dropping her spoon when Rhoslyn asked if she liked Oreius! I hope you can update soon!! ~SL05 |
| Reepicheepet 2006-07-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt's okay. A little confusing. I like the story about Zyllie (If that's how you spell her name) better. Don't stop writing. Have fun! Eat lots of chocolate! |
| SilverLight05 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseNot bad for the first chapter. I'm kinda interested in where you're going to take this story, so please update soon!! ~SL05 |