Oh my gosh! This was the cutest. I loved the creative names you used for the colors, and the ending was just perfect. I love Chanoey. They were definitely meant for each other.
Nice work.

--MissFlapjack

Aw! I love this! You put alot of thought into this, I could tell. Usually im not much for free-verse, but this truly took my breath away.

I like it very much. As a Chinese college students, I guess I' m very lucky to major in English, cause I can read more English slash stories. This kind of story is also very popular in China, and there are a lots of straight female readers interested in slash stories of various kinds.

I like it and hpoe you can continue to write!

hee.. YAY!1!

Joey getting very romantic!

this is really cute... i think though that you should add more chapters.. this could go somewhere

Very sweet. But there are a couple of spelling errors like "definsive."

Yay I love it!

PS: My email's been acting up a bit lately, so I might not get back to you in a while. I can get on sometimes so I'll try.

Woah.. that was one of the best things I have read about Chandler in my entire life... BRAVO!! One thing worries me... why would Joey pay so much attention to Chandler's eyes? I mean, a little obsessive there...

Anywho, who cares? It was a great poem, Cudos!

How much did i love this?
Really good, very effective for such a short story.
Well done!

Hehe. Thats good