Great..:)

"...she found her face caught between two hands, which was weird because she thought a hand had licked her cheek..."

KYA! Well. Deidara's hands canNOT be neglected in our lovely fluff fanfics. <3

Good job. DeiHina makes me giggle ^_^

You story is great,I hope the others would read and review your stories...GOOD LUCK!

I love deiHina yeah xD it's my OTP (: anyway really nice :]

i don't know who "lala" is, but Deidara is a MALE. It's made obvious when he fights Sasuke in Part 2 of the manga.

Sorry that I don't have an E-mail, workin' on it, when I do I'll try to contact you again, but I really loved this story, like A-LOT! I was just sad that it ended so quickly... It's REALLY good. It seems like it should have had alot more to it though. I will definatly try to contact you when I get an E-mail account. And again, I REALLY loved the story. -Lilu Bluefox, the little Starry Eyed Ninja

great beginning can you have hinata fall in love with one of the other akatsuki members and have deidara go jelous and try win her back or something to make deidara go crazy.

What! that was it I thought there would be a bit more but still it was a great fic. I really Like it!

Loved it.
Very cute.
Too bad it's only a one shot.

That was a very good oneshot, it seems possible to happen .. nice work

I Love This Story! It Is So Cool.

Nice!! =D

0.0 OMG! CONTINUE PLZ! I LOVE IT! ^_^

I loved it, yeah. :D Can you write more:D? o_o

It is kinda proven in the manga, (chap 360>) that Deidara is a guy, so that person really doesn't have a clue. Im writing this before I read it, but im pretty sure I would end up writing, "Great fanfic, I enjoyed it" or something like that. unknown praise for you!