 TAMARANEMPRESS 2009-05-10 . chapter 1 LOL CHECK ME OUT |
 DarkAlessa 2009-04-30 . chapter 1 Lol check me out |
 Driven-To-Insanity 2007-06-03 . chapter 1Dude... one word... killer! "You dare question the coolness of my hair?" That is something that I say! LOL! Great job as always Erik... |
 Nexus Prime 2006-11-22 . chapter 1This is the best story ever. |
 AimzNemesis 2006-09-11 . chapter 1“You dare question the coolness of my hair?” Christabella looked to her cultists for help. “Heresy! Burn her! BURN HER!”
“YOUR HAIR BRINGS DEATH!” Rose yelled. An abrupt silence filled the church.
“Now that I’ve got your attention,” Rose went on, “would you kindly not burn my daughter?”
Funny stuff. XD That, and the mental image of Dahlia with a large duck. |
 vega 356 2006-09-05 . chapter 1pretty funny |
 Lt. Gaydar 2006-07-12 . chapter 1*laughs obnoxiously*
I loved reading that, nice and simple. The mental picture of Dahlia running into the church with a large duck, was a hilarious sight to see.
Good work. |
 Shuyu 2006-07-12 . chapter 1Double-you Tee Eff?
That was hilarious, even though I haven't seen the movie. Or... played any of the games for that matter, but that's beside the point.
I loved the disclaimer, about not owning Bush. No one would WANT to have George Bush as their property.
Anyway, I loved that, it was great. |