Wow... Amazing, well done. This is exactly what I thought when I was watching the movie

This is so sad, it makes me want to cry. But I like it, it takes you back to the ending of the movie. Ohh how i hope that Elizabeth and Jack end up together!(but then again, it's disney so i doubt thats gonna happen.) A girl can dream, right?

Intense. I like it. :)

I HATED that part of the movie and the "Hello Beastie" and...and..., well this isnt a review for the movie but for the oneshot, as i was saying
very well written, adn i could feel the emotions in Elizabeth
good job!!
Peace out ~*^*~ PoweroftheFrogs

That is so beautiful and sad. *Adds to faves*

Loved it! Short and angsty.. Good job :)

Oh... *sniff* Its so sad! I find it very difficult to decide between jackXelizabeth and willXelizabeth. They both have potential! Wonderfully written, as usual.
~Mirage992

Well, I wish it was longer. I hope the other chapters are longer lol. But I like the idea and want to read more, so please continue!
Modesty

Rather short, but great just the same! This is going on my favorites list...

I'll be looking for more from you!

Until further, I remain but your most obedient Jedi Master,
M.J.

very good i liked this

Wow, great story! This is one of the few POtC that I've read that actually works. You should write more on this subject, Jack and Elizabeth i mean. great job.

We all wish we owned Johnny Depp.
Sweetie, I love you, but I can't stand Elizabeth/Jack. I wanted to scream everytime they were close to making out.
This is beautifully written though. You did really well taking that scene and morphing it.
I was so happy with that last shot of Jack. A shot of a man looking ready to go would not be him at all. He'd go out with a fight.
Gah! Barbossa! How did he return?!
((I miss the monkey.))

This was really good, well done. I don't know whether it's a one-parter, but it's brilliant. Fantastic!

KK x