I think its cool how you're incorporating direct quotes from the series into your fanfic. Like the reference to Li in Zuko alone, and how you redid the crystal catacombs episode.

Haha, its so like Zuko to respond to a simple thank you a few hours later. :D My favorite part of every episode is Katara's monologue at the beginning. I'm so happy you included it in your fanfic!

Eek! I loved this story so much, keep up the good work.

I didn't review this one either. *claps* Yeah. Anyways, yeah.
Zuko: You have nothing to say do you?
Me: No, not really.
Zuko: Thought so.
Me: Zuko, could you do me a favor.
Zuko: What?
Me: Could you kiss Katara.
Zuko: No.
Me: I won't tell her what you did last summer.
Zuko: Fine. *kisses Katara*
Katara: What did he do last summer.
Me: *evil grin* He kissed you.

I didn't reveiw this one either.
Zuko: *looking unamused* Great.
Me: I know isn't it great! Hey, I wonder if Roku and Kyoshi go to a spirit Bathhouse?
Zuko: I don't know.
Me: I should ask Aang to look for one next time he goes to the Spirit World. In Spirited Away there's a spirit named No Face, and he reminds me of Koh.

HA! I knew I didn't review this one.
Zuko: Do you have a plan or something?
Me; No, not really. I can't remember which ones I reviewed. When i originally started reading this, I just skimmed the last few chapters, and not reviewing. Yeah...well...I saw Spirited Away! It is SO MUCH better than Princess Monoke. Haku one of the main characters, he's a boy, with black hair and golden green eyes and reminds me of Zuko. He can turn into a dragon. Yeah, I love Spirited Away. Its really good and I love the music in it.

'“I told you I’d always be nearby,” the old general replied with a wolfish grin. “No nephew of mine is going to sneak into the Fire Lord’s palace without some backup.”'

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! I love that line. ^_^

*prays the old guard doesn't sound the alert fast enough*

...Course, he would likely tell them.

*continues on to see what will happen next*

Great story!

yay! an avatar fic! a great zuko/katara fic!

This fic was good! And the sequal ideas are cool. I think you should go with it!

cool chapter!

good chapter.
oh! If you want to see a good video, go to youtube and look for 'Waterbenders stand in the Rain.' Just saying, has some good Waterbending scenes and the fight between Zuko and Katara and the North Pole.

good chapter, but maybe you should add a bit more detail or make the chaps a bit longer.

good chapter