Ah, you and your mystery pairings. I had NaruSaku in my mind when I read this, though I tried re-reading it with HinaKiba and it still worked pretty well. Anyway, lovely angst as usual. Usually I'd pout and try to get fluff from someone who writes so much angst, but you do it so well. It's just your thang. (Sry. I know I'm lame.)I like the contrast between that nice, warm moment you gave us and the chill of the ending - and if it's really NaruSaku, I have to say I love what you did with Sakura, how you brought out a gentler side to her.

Again: Great piece. Same review as 1st and 2nd, and this time I'll add that I loved the crumbled flower. So sad. *sniffs*

On the three you have out so far: Great job. I got a little confused on the third piece, but after some time thinking about it, it all came together. I'll be waiting for your fourth. ^_^

Oh! Awesome again! Same review as my first + it's ingenious how you set this one up as a flashback. Great idea. Wonderful piece.

Fantastic! I love how you keep the two ninjas ambiguous - it's makes you (or me at least) go on to figure out who exactly these two people are, what they're like, how they act, etc. I dunno. Maybe I'm just weird. And I'm jealous of how you can keep your story so short and yet so utterly perfect.

Oh my oh my...they get better and better! I can't wait for more...

You are amazing, I love this one too!

WOW...! I LOVED it...

Truthfully flowing, which makes it nice to read. You know those kind of drabbles which kind of 'flow'? Yeah, yours nice xP. Keep working then.

Hm...for some reason, I imagined Hinata and Naruto in this. Like, if Naruto lost control of the Kyuubi and had to be taken down - then Hinata would be the one to kill him, to 'do the right thing'. I always enjoy guessing who you're writing about ^_^

Anyhow, intriguing stuff.

'He knew she would not have done it and hated her weakness. She knew she would and she hated her weakness.'

*heartaches*

Well, by now you should have realized that I like your writing a lot. ^__^ I think I love your angst especially - how you take one short moment and imbue it with meaning. This was such a heart-tugging read; I really, really liked the part about her looking to him, asking him why she killed the missing-nin. *huggles her* Lovely work!

umm... i dont really like it that much. it is very short and it needs some improvment but i sorta like it and i hope other ppl will too!