The analogy made it quite different and amusing! Yeah metaphors! They're metapphors! Aren't they? I like how it fits so well and Gojyo's teasing was quite a laugh. Especially when Gojyo made fun of Goku's attachment to Sanzo.*Snicker* The way Hakkai kept intervening and finishing Gojyo's sentences awoke the Gojyo Hakkai fangirl in me. Haha!

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Very, very cute. :D

I really like all the metaphors used in their speech, and of course, the Goku-Sanzo bit is really cute. :D Ahh, just think of this simple symbolism of how Goku thinks Sanzo(Konzen) is his sun while Konzen thinks Goku is his sun makes me all squee-like. :D

I am really liking your Saiyuki fics. This one is also going in my c2 archive and you're going on my author alerts. I encourage you to write more I really like the way that you portray the characters.

Yay!! I love your story please write more soon! ^_^