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| Nymbis 2007-07-04 ch 5,  | abuseYou have very interesting characters and it's cool how you've taken the main plot of DOTM and added your own twist to it. I especially like how the 'Magna Mater' of this group isn't exactly a mater ;) Bonus points for applying the myth to it too ^.^ (I'm a huge classics geek so whenever I see mythological references I'm a happy camper lol) I'm looking forward to finding out more about your characters, Jamee and Mona in particular :) !nym! |
| Dark Lights The Way 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abusePlease update. The reviewer who said that butterfly was a dumb name is wrong, butterfly is an AWESOME name. Please update soon!! -Dark |
| ShatteredDiamonds 2006-12-04 ch 3, | abuseUPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! -Butterfly |
| britin's beauty 2006-09-24 ch 4, | abusetie strory was great but the names and powers were a little boring if u could think of any other names because Vanessa Butterfly vanessa means butterfly so it's a little expectible and butterfly no ofence is a stupid name how bout anything but that and there last names to and there powers i mean i would understand if they had SOME of the same powers but not ALL of them just a little advice. peace and love erin* |
| ShatteredDiamonds 2006-09-12 ch 2, | abusewhen are you going to make another chapter?? please, i LOVE this story. |
| ShatteredDiamonds 2006-09-12 ch 4, | abuseyay, another chapter. hehe, good job, Nick sounds cute, hes like Jake my dream guy. haha, anyway keep up the good work |
| Alyssa 2006-07-26 ch 4, anon. | abuseTHIS IS SO AWESOME! Please can you make more of em'? And if you get writers block I can help (Im not trying to sound rude) please read my story called "Daughters of the Spirits, its sorta realated to yours." Alyssa |