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Reviews For: Dark Side of the Moon - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

Arian69
2008-07-30
ch 6,
abusei like it a lot! please update!
Luka1Sakura
2007-12-14
ch 3,
abuseim confused and i thought this was a rogue fic?
A Concerned Citizen
2007-06-28
ch 6, anon.
abuseI just noticed that its been a year since an update, which is really too bad, since this story is too too good. I know Real Life can get in the way, but I really hope you'll be able to find time to put a new chapter up soon please!
Annie
2007-06-06
ch 6, anon.
abuseIts been so long since you updated! I really hope there will be more soon, because this story is so fantastic. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!
Mercy P. Jones
2007-04-01
ch 6,
abuseOh my God, I love it! I was hooked! I was sad to find that this was the last chapter you posted, I really really really really really really really really really want to read the next one! Post soon!
Kaika-sama
2007-01-18
ch 6,
abuseBLOODY UPDATE PLEASE! I wanna know what happens! And what the hell happened with Rogue and Jean? I won't know until you update.
darkrogue33
2006-10-16
ch 6, anon.
abuseOMG PLZ UPDATE SOON! THIS ROX!
Lurker
2006-10-07
ch 6, anon.
abusePlease update soon! Its been way too long since a new chapter, this is way too good to just leave!!
Quillian
2006-07-30
ch 6,
abuseOK, I'm interested. :) Looking forward to more!
Pyric
2006-07-29
ch 6,
abuse:D

Not much else to say (not that smiling actually counts as 'saying' anything...)

Twists and turns indeed! Oh Mystique, ever the trouble-maker. Loved the minor Kiotr; you really have Piotr nailed in terms of character. Nicely done!

And phone-calls from Remy. Poor Jamie :P

Oh, I hope the X-Men make it in time! Then again, with a false Scott in place...oh the drama that could possibly ensue!

Over all, marvelous yet again. Some wonderful insight into several characters who recieve hardly any attention, namely Jamie and Piotr.

And the storm rolls on!
CosmicPhoenix
2006-07-29
ch 6,
abuseWow. I really, really wish I could write like that. That is just amazing. Well, you got the characters right. But there's just one thing. When the series ended Jamie was about 13. Jubilee and Rahne were both 14. I think Roberto was 15. And Sam, Bobby, Ray, Tabitha, Amara, and Alex were 16. Just thought I'd let you know. Other than that you did a great job on the characters. Like I said before, I really wish I could do that! :D Anyway, keep up the good work.
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe
2006-07-28
ch 6,
abuseWow! I can't believe this! Your review response to my review for last chapter was a great lil read! All that information on Rogue was so awesome! SO MANY TWISTS AND TURNS! I have no idea where you come up with such awesome ideas! KUDOS! Hats off to you! UPDATE SOON!

~Chica~
Secret Agent Smut Girl
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseI can't wait to keep reading- but I had to review right away and tell you how well written this is. I love the characters train of thought and the ambience. Great!
emotionalcrack
2006-07-27
ch 6,
abuse...

I'm so confused... um, let's see the caller that jamie talked to said "bloody" so I'm guessing they are from england or australia... maybe Betsy. But Betsy wouldn't be so rude, would she? Okay maybe its Mr. Sinister his from there too. Or maybe Ms Frost, she can be a ** at times.

I was wondering why Jamie couldn't recongnize Remy. But it made since after a couple paragraphs.

update soon
ishandahalf
2006-07-27
ch 6,
abuseoh, huzzah for another update! i must say, i'm loving the speed in which your new chapters are churned out, but i really have to say that it just isn't enough! which is meant to be compliment and not a nitpick, of course - this is totally my new obsession, every time i reach the end of the newest chapter i keep wishing there was more!:)
and as usual, this time was no exception. i absolutely adored your portrayal of piotr - i have such a softspot for the big lug! although i'm partial to him and kitty being together, so i'm not quite sure i'm liking where his thoughts were heading regarding carol... although that may be because i'm still somewhat suspicious of her. despite ms marvel not being one of my favourite characters, i'm still eager to see more of her - if only to find out more about her motivations and such.
nice capture of scott's worry and frustrations, by the way. the scene in the shower felt so RAW, well done. but geez, his troubles are far from over, aren't they? i'm guessing that's mystique at the end there, taking his place? great, what does she want NOW? obviously, not a good thing.
and well done managing to work in a bit of humour with jamie's scene! i've got to hand it to you, i felt SO worried and frustrated that remy's message wouldn't be recieved, and yet you managed to make me giggle. salesperson indeed... and i'm taking some comfort in the fact that it's rogue's name remy utters in his delirious state. :)
THANKFULLY jamie's guilt got the better of him! glad remy's distress call was picked up, however lacking it details it may have been. but hmm, who was that other caller? i have a suspicion, but i'll just keep my arbitrary guesses to myself for now so i don't make too much of a fool out of myself. ;) anyhoo, i can't help but be apprehensive about the new mutants unwittingly setting out to stop a massacre... oh boy. time to cue the dramatic music, eh?
so! the uber battles are coming up, and i can't wait! bring it on, quick like a bunny on crack. ;)
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