Great story!

Love it, but one question: DId you memorize the scene? I swear that was word for word!

Lol

It was cute , I really liked the story. Normally I dont review things but this was too sweet not to. I hope its not a oneshot because I would love to read more.

That was a pretty good start. I really want to see how you're going to continue this story, so please update soon!

I really liked the concept of this story, and you did a good job of working the dialogue from the actual episode into your narrative.

The only aspect of this srory that I find irksome is some of the descriptive language that you use. Do you really have to refer to the door as "the rectangular object"?

Wow. That was a great chapter and i really love your Logan voice. Your writing is really descriptive and i love the last line of this chapter. Please continue!