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Fantasyname
2009-08-29 . chapter 2
Wah, that's mean, I can't use scented paper in germany 'cause for tests and exams we get papers ;-;
I didn't think there even were serious AshuFai-FFs, focusing on that pairing...
Fai'swingedchronicles
2008-06-20 . chapter 4
Your continueing this right? It salittle ooc but in a good way!
Annie
2008-02-20 . chapter 1
Dear Bloodytwistedangel:

Hi, It's Annie! I like your work "Cliched" very much and I am asking for putting it on my blog (since my blog is in Chinese, I may try my best to translate it...). May you answer me through my e-mail? Hoping you'll say yes!

Best regards,
Annie
amberhearts
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Wai! The first one's so sad...*sniffle* ~ But I love this series~It's Ashufai! Yey!
Blissdreamer
2007-03-11 . chapter 4
Update? 0.o...
Blissdreamer
2006-12-03 . chapter 4
You are one of the most brilliant writer ever. And you really can't deny that...

Are you planning to continue? You better! If you are, then... Update SOON!

Bliss...
daisukiangel42
2006-11-11 . chapter 4
very cute ^_^
Bishop-hime95
2006-10-31 . chapter 4
It short but cute ^^
Next chapter !! please !
Bishop-hime95
2006-10-31 . chapter 3
What is the "-koi" ??
I am font of !! It is so romantic >/<

J'espere qu'il aura ce couple dans le manga !!
Bishop-hime95
2006-10-31 . chapter 2
Trop bien !! Mon couple préferé !! AshuFay !

J'adore cette histoire avec Fay écolier ^^ mdr j'adore le caractére d'Ashura ^^
Moi aussi je voulais qu'il s'embrasse XD
Pauvre Fay qui lance son avion en papier et qu'il se fait jarter par le prof lol

My english is not good ^^ , it is very very cool ^^ you are the good autor ^^
Azul-the-Kitsune
2006-10-30 . chapter 4
This is one of the few drabbles I like :) Don't feel bad about not updating, I know what that's like x.x I've gone months without updating before... but that's just because Im lazy ^^; Anyway, great job and happy halloween!
To Die Laughing
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
Ie...! Very nice!^^
CLAMP-yuuko
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
That was beautiful! I love it! I loved how you decribed their thought's!
evilteddybear
2006-09-08 . chapter 3
Hisies!

Thank you for writing!

This fic was easier to understand but not that easy. Your train of thought is just so hard to catch a ride on. I don't even want to guess at what tickets cost. Anyway, It was very creative of you to combine the Celes world with the modern world. You did do that right? I like the interaction between Ashrua and Fai. I like your portrayal of Ashura. I like the "what kind of idiot are you?" "I'm your idiot" comment. It made me smile. bysies!
evilteddybear
2006-09-08 . chapter 1
In your words "hisies!"

This was very good, but like many of your works, very hard to follow. It didn't really connect you know? It was hard to figure out what you were trying to convey.

What I got out of this is that Ashura and Fai loved each other. Ashura didn't pay attention to Fai, or he couldn't express his love except in twisted ways. Because of that Fai felt unloved and it hurt that Ashura wasn't there for him. Feeling unloved Fai slept around. He was frustrated and Ashura abused him, because that was the only way Ashura knew how to love. Then Fai and sealed Ashura away because their relationship was painful and Fai wanted to run away? Is that what happened?
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