Is the pink goo a nicer version of the Marabounta? I am just a curiosity-killed-the-cat person.

You go Aelita!

The first chapter was not that good. Jeremie is acting ooc. Although I do realize that if he wasn't there wouldn't be much of a plot. But still, I'd suggest changing the first chapter a bit, like mentioning the mouse get into his room, instead of him being in the forest. And you need to learn a bit ore of the linear functions of LYoko. YOur science is very unsound, and you need to watch a few more episodes to get a feel for code lyoko.

Hm, interesting... just like Jeremy to be attracted to an unusual kind of pet and to name it Einstein... hm, can't wait to see where this goes!