wow... i really love this story... i really liked edwards pov... it was loverly... keep up the good work :-)

P.S.

i loved all the other chapters that i didnt get a chance to review on too!

aww man. edward always runs away.

btw, he SORTA seems mean here. but oh well. AWESOME CHAPPIE! update soon!

-moira

Its a good plot. But Edward is surpassed OOC. I mean he isn't that devious and malicious. He wouldn't easily thing of killing Mike, or the class or whatever. He doesn't want to be that way in the beginning. Your plot is good, and the story is good til this chapter. Well, it is good, just how you played with Edward. He is too different! T.T

Sami

O.o CONTINUE! DON'T LEAVE IT HERE YOU MAD WOMAN!

Oh my gosh! That was perfect! I think you totally caught Edward! This is, without a doubt, your best chapter yet. And the best Edward PoV I have ever read. You deserve, like, a gazillion Oreos for it.

I loved how you caught on to how strongly his blood lust really is with Bella. It was amazing. And I also loved how you had him realize her beauty. That was very well played. I completely think you should write more of Edward's PoV. But don't forget about Bella! I don't know. I can't choose which view I like more when you write. They're both so good! I can't wait until your next chapter! Drey!

PS: Bella should totally meet Edward in the next chappie! -grin-

It sounds good so far, ironic that they still manage to meet up.

woot! that was really good. the next chap must be out soon! or..or i'll explode! (.

YAY! I love it! If I had Edward's cell number, I would probbably call so much, he'd have to change it. ;) Can't wait for more.

Yay! You pulled it off it was really good too! Update soon please! Like a ton of bricks could hurt Edward lol

Write in EPOV again. What does he think about Bella being the one with the wrong number all the time? Come on, PLEASE!

HEY!

What a ka-winky-dink (coensedense- spelt wrong). I so can't wait for the next chapter. This hilarous. PLEASE UPDATE!

TA TA FOR NOW! XD

Love2All

You should totally do it in Edward's POV! This chapter made me smile, then made me frown when the cliffhanger ended the chapter. *mutters under breath*

Yay! What a wonderful chapter! The cliffie is unbearable though. Only one way to fix that... Update soon please!

ooh! Wow! write more soon, always with the wrong number... I always do that when I call my one friend! Turned out that the person who I kept on calling, was the dude that I liked!

Great chapter, write more soon

11!

love,

elyse

WOOT! You updated! That makes me glad...I think for the next chapter you should switch to Edward's POV but maybe in the middle change it back to Bella's. Anyway update soon!