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hey great story i really like it i hope you come up with more great ideas for this story. i'll try and read more of your stories whenever i can. have fun writting and good luck. bi.

I recall seeing this somewhere...

Recognize me? Math class? Whose hobby is to annoy you every day while you are studying spanish during lunch? lightbulb moment

Anyways, good job! Keep up the good work!

AWW.

So Cute.

Liked the suicidalness in the 3rd chapter, it made it less fluffy, but still gave the story the right amount. Goodjob!

All that for a bookstore? Well, I can understand, though. It must men a lot to her since ner parents and her own house don't understand her. *shrug* on to the next chapter!

It was still a great ending!

uh no!

Interesting chapter!

Poor Sam. Great chapter!

I enjoyed it. I hope to read more from you in the future.

good chapter POTC 2 ROCKS! if you haven't seen it yet i suggest you do it's abolutly AMAZING!

great chapter! i dont think any of it sucks! update soon!

OMG I loved it! I was laughing part of the time, yet feeling sad, and still yet, feeling overjoyed, all at once! You're doing a GREAT job!

DarkMoon1301

Good story so far but it's so not fair that they don't want to go see 'Pirate of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest". I saw it on opening day and it is possibly the best movie ever. I just don't think that you're writing the characters right if they don't like 'Pirates of the Caribbean'. Jazz, Danny and Sam would like both of the movies, 'The Curse of the Black Pearl' & "Dead Man's Chest'. Tucker probably wouldn't but, like you said, no technology. And I absolutly hate it when people call it 'Pirates of the Caribbean 2." It has a name. People need to respect. Sorry if I'm being a little too pissy but it was a great movie and people need to know that. Have you even seen either of them? You should. Cause if you did then you would know that they would never choose 'Click' over 'Pirates of the Caribbean' any day of the week.

But good story line!,

Jack Sparrow's Lover