Hey,

Haven't heard from u in a while, but so far I like what I see...I love the scene about chasing the squirrel 2 classic can't wait 4 the next chapter.

Peace!

Hmm. I Really enjoyed the beginning chapter of this story (which I read just a few moments ago) but I think you've been drifting a bit since then. Its all good, but I think she's acting A) a little bit too immaturely, you mentioned she was in college, which states that probably Jacky would have a bit of more mature attitude and B) I don't think she would have accepted the appearance of Will all that well. You said she didn't like the house and that it creeped her out. Despite the fact that its her old friend, she had long since given up the reality of having an imaginary friend. C) When you have screaming, don't put in the "AH" thing all the time, it really takes away from the story. And I don't think its plausible for her to be able to see JACK, and maybe even Will. It would take time, as she's past the stages where most people even think of ghosts or believe in them.

Now I'm saying all this as advice. Whether you want to take it or not, is up to you. I see potential in this story if you fixed it up a little. But I would definately like to see more of this!

*bounces up and down like a little kid*

What happens next? What happens next?

heehee "poor donkey..." :)

oh lord is this a great find! I look around for something worthwhile, one last story to read afore bed. This be it, mate, and i am glad i found it. there's just one thing it needs, see: And UPDATE! savvy?

*Laughs till faces turns blue* This is so funny! And you've thrown Jack into the mix! What's gonna happen next?

Haha ugly tanned rasta-dude! still great cant wait to read more!
~QI

Yes! Brownie points for originality! truly splended story! I expect you to continue it, correct? ;) Please hurry. I'm curious to see what adventures our piratical duo have in store for the poor Miss Norry, seeing as she is caught in a hurrican for a while. More soon, please and thank you!

Hi, normally I don't read many Will/OC fics, I think this has been my first one in a while, but anyways it was really good and funny. Please update this is a good fic.

Err...Did you know that Port Royale is now underwater?

This is probably the best, and most original, fanfic I've ever read! Keep up the great work and please update soon.
~QI