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Yumi14
2009-10-09 . chapter 23
Another thing,you can take your time.If I were in your spot,I would have done the same thing as you do.
Good luck! =>
Yumi14
2009-10-09 . chapter 23
You said it wasn't PERMANENT right?So please hurry back.I have been searching this story for MONTHS!!I(as well as the readers maybe) want to know the ending.

ONEGAI!! XO
xxxmizuki-chanxxx
2009-04-07 . chapter 23
mabye for the next chapter... its inoshika right? well if it is you should have shikamaru's father through a big party and he invites ino's uncle and aunt so ino has to go because her aunt and uncle dont give her a choose or something :P i hope you get an idea you are such a good writer!

xx Mimi-chan
i-heart-kaoru
2009-03-28 . chapter 17
hey, i command u by the power of naruto's and hinata's love to complete this story so i have an exscuse to go on the computer on weekdays! i love this story so far and u r a really good drawer and i love your work so far on this story, but u have to finish it! how about, for ino, u have ino and aoi teamed up w/ kankuro, ruin temari's life by a) tearing her room apart. b) stealing all of her clothes so that all that she is left w/ are too small clothes, a bunny suit and a dress that a hick should wear. c) have aoi squeeze it out of shikamaru that he loves ino and was forced by temari to "break up" with ino because temari threatened to send ino home in a crate w/ dogs on a cargo plane back to japan and that he will never see her again-right in front of ino. if u want to make a story good, stop hiatus-ing and finish it! HIATus-ing is just as bad as quitting! but, other than thant, keep up the work that i will hunt you down and force you to do in the near future! ;D
khorol26
2008-12-14 . chapter 23
i luv ur stories. and writin is really hard so its not wonder u may not hav sum ideas now. so just take ur time :D (which i shope is soon :P)
Koo2Koo1Ka2choo1
2008-11-28 . chapter 23
its ok i and hopefully sll of the other readers understand my story(s) are taking me awhile to update too...it happens to everyone
Sheiryy
2008-11-28 . chapter 23
NOO NOO NOO NOO NOO NOO NOO NOO!!
T.T

*Sigh* Okay then...
I guess I can wait... JUST UPDATE WHENEVER YOU'RE READY OKAY!!?? :O
I wanna read your story... T.T
Oh well, just keep up the good work going! :D
And good luck!! :D

Sheiryy.
mangamaniacgurl
2008-11-04 . chapter 22
I love this story!
Uchiha-Kirara
2008-09-27 . chapter 22
..wow
this story is so AMAZING!!

The fab four! That's quite a good name^^
I like it :)

AND I love this story! It's so exciting,it has its ups and downs and the romance and humor are brilliant as well. I just enjoye reading it and it's really awesome!

Hiashi is such a bastard -.-"
Just because he doesn't like Naruto is no reason to take the love of her life from his daughter. She's HIS daughter for pete's sake!! What did she do to deserve that? WHAT?!
Damn it I could kill Hiashi for that! >:(

And Neji, god damn it! Just because he's afraid of loosing her is no reason either to break up with Tenten! What did SHE do to deserve THIS?! Just cuz Neji is stupid. -.-"
But at least they're an item now again :)

GR SHIKAMARU HOW DARE YOU LIKE CHEAT OT INO?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
GR GR GRGR
I'LL KICK HIS SORRY A S S! GR >:(
Ino doesn't deserve this. She's such a good girl! And she even tried to be "the sweet" one! She did her best! And what does she get -.-"

Sakura,tsk,tsk,tsk. I don't understand why she broke up with Sasuke. (could you explain it to me? I really didn't understand it!!)
The only thing I can say to that situation is that I pity Sasuke. Sakura knows that he was never in a relationship before, that SHE is THE ONE that took HIS HEART! But yet she broke up with him! What did HE do to deserve THIS?!
xSabinXandxShelley'sXMMGxGirl
2008-09-13 . chapter 22
get that next chap up now! shikaxino 4 eva love it love ya and you probbaly love that this reviwes over
Lipinha
2008-09-09 . chapter 22
this is lame..lame..lame..lame..lame...LAME!!

plz, put them all together...plzplzplz

I like happy endings..put them all together and happy and put romantic stuff too..

(and write Tsunade, not Tsuande...)(I hate the word Tsuande, it makes me want to break something..)

PLEASE, MAKE THIS STORY A HAPPY ENDING(I need happy things 'cause I'm sad, school's up...** ** **...)
Lipinha
2008-09-09 . chapter 18
hinata's father's name is Hiashi...lol
Lipinha
2008-09-08 . chapter 6
OMFG! Sakura fainted! kakakakakaka that's bad..he's gonna hate her!!
ariel
2008-09-07 . chapter 22
please review i'm begging you(i'll give you cookies!) pretty please with cherries on top?
kaYeYe
2008-08-17 . chapter 22
nice story...
update soon...
XD
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