Please send me the uncut clips thanks

Plplease send uncut to mepleqs

Love the story you have to write more :)

could u emiel me the uncut part please xxxxx

could you please send me the uncut version

great story didnt sound very funny but picturing will in my head made me laugh

Hey are you still sending out the uncut chapter?

Curious as to what happened...

Bibz

really good email is

hey man the story was pretty good u should write more.

can u send me the uncut chapter

Good Story.

Yin: Well... that was... interesting...!

Yang: Idiot. It's spelled: Idiot.

Yin: Oh yah! and you mispelled midget You might wanna check your chapters more before posting them. Hehe!

Yang: Very OOC. The characters didn't act like themselves at all... and it's called FanFiction so that you can write about characters as they are. If you want other characters then make them ):

And you spelled Hawaii wrong.

Yin: And to all you other reviewers...You have a very unique taste in stories LoL. I mean, did any of you actually notice the spelling/grammar/character flaws...? I know that people don't really like giving criticism because they don't wanna be rude...

Yang: BUT, often times it's more helpful to give some constructive criticism than compliments, though those are nice too.

Yin: OOh! I have a compliment! This story is really hilarious. And you actually got Carlton's character right a few times. If you get an editor, they could help make this story posalutely absitively fantabulous! HeHe, LoL!

Yang: Yeah. The story itself isn't really bad, it's just that the diction isn't really good. There's not enough supporting detail and the punctuation could probably use some work-

Yin: -Nod-Nod-

Yang: So pretty much, you could make it a good story with spell check. And other such things. Good luck in writing! (:

Yin: Remember. SpellCheck! Mucho importante

Blessed be,

-Yin and Yang

Hey I would like the uncut chapter please.

send me uncut capters plz

Hey Ide the uncut ones

hello! id like to see the uncut chapters

holy crap! that wuz pretty good! can i have da uncut chaps? thnx :)

Rachel :)

great story send