OMG soo good but oh soo sad i had to cover my mouth i thought id sob lol thank god i know that would never happen on the show. good story and emotion though.

That was so sad. I hope John doesn't die next season. I know that the boys won't. Anyway great story.

aw to sad! but good!

you were so right when you said this was a tear jerker! You made me cry so bad! Incredibly well written though!

This is incredible! :) It is wonderfully written, very haunting and poignant.

I loved the fact that you leave the reader wondering for a while who is it that is going to die. I also really enjoyed the way you wrote Dean's death, and that once he said I love you, Sam knew it was over.

Any chance of a sequel? *looks hopeful, attempts Sam's soulful puppy dog eyes* :) It would be so interesting to see what John and Dean are going to do.

Incredible work! :)

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