Man, how did I miss this story before? I don’t know whether to laugh at how you used to write or be amazed at how much you’ve improved…I think I might do both. OMFG, what were you thinking…looking at this, I’m glad you improved as a writer….seriously, did you even write this….if you hadn’t improved this much, none of us would reading that masterpiece called Zero2…Hahaha…truly amazing how one improves over the years…hahaha…keep up the good work….hahaha*falls of chair and hits back of head on mini fridge*Ow….my pride, but probably had that coming. But all in all, decent story :-p

Me is tired...midnight waiting for my dad to give me my rightfully owned dinner. :P
Anyways, I took a midway break(I last read chapter 25) from Zero 2: A revision. BTW, I loved Housemates!!*claps*
But it isn't about those two...:D
Usually, when people write one shots based on Dai-kun, they write about how the others mistreat him. When they write on his thoughts, they usually write this angsty driven chain about how he's alone and so on. But you actually wrote GOOD thoughts on the others from his point of view. Nicely written, plus it gave me a break from those long 30-80 chapter stories I've been reading with about 20 billion words. Now that I've refreshed myself, back to Zero Two: A Revision!

That was a gret one-shot, Ultra Sonikku! For some of the things that were said, I had never thought that he WOULD say them; out loud at least. I can see him saying them in his head, though. Anywho, again, great one-shot, and I hope you write more like this one. Maybe one from each digidestined's perspective?It's your choice, of course. Please, just tell me if you do. This is so good, it's going on my Favorites list!

Kouji-wolf

it's interesting... but a bit... i dunno should i say pointless? the descriptions are good but they don't really go along with anything...

but i still like it. it's good.

hi...um...that was really sweet...um...but odnomal...

Whatever...

Love, Kari

I think this was an awesome piece of work for a first story. You have absolutely portrayed into Davis's thoughts as if it was authentic. Very nice.

Your thoughts have really hit into my thoughts of Davis. He was my favorite male character (with Catherine my favorite female character). I always believed that, even though he can be obsessed with Kari occasionally, I always thought he'd put that second when it comes to other important situations, especially when it comes to a friend who needs his aid.

In a special piece of work I made up at home (the fanfiction won't be not found here or any other website, to let all of you know), a female Original Character, Kansy Halbery to be specific, targeted that fact at one point, strengthening his pride greatly.

I always believed that when he gets mocked by the others, his pride gets shot down gradually. And I always feel sorry for him. That's why I like him so much.

You did a great job as of being your first fanfiction.

Nice work... I truly believe you got everything down... I really believe those are davis true opinions for everyone.. I have seen season 2 and trust me you have interpreted davis real thoughts... Through his actions in the show, you just can tell that's what he really thinks...

I thought this was really neat. Great idea. I thought his thoughts on everyone were acurate to him. Awesome job.
*Smiles!*

Awesome, dude, this was great!

When are you planning to add another chapter to the Digi-Episodes?