wow, I almost never read poetry on this site, but I have to say that this was impressive! You used simple words, but they captured the essence of the story beautifully. The way it flowed was quite remarkable. Wonderful.

omg it made me cry i didn't get it at first but i really liked it great job do more!

Let me tell you, poetry is insanely rare here, but I'm glad I read this. It was seriously amazing. There was power in the words, and it was really well done, and a great take on the story. There was emotion, there was great rhymes, and there was a fabulous retelling. I was very pleased at the end, and all through it you kept me not only entertained but very interested, and it was the perfect length. I thought it was well written, and I barely care that it wasn't capitalized, because for this, the contents are more important. But you did spell worry 'wory' once and that is a small problem that can easily be corrected. This was great!

Crying again...wunnerful...

Best KH poem I've ever read. You just brightened my day!

we've come a long way ;;/three friends with a dream/one land ;; one sea ;;/one sky ;; one destiny/with her, there are new feelings/but through all the trials/we are still much the same/best friends ;; better rivals"

Wow. Just, wow.

I couldn't have described their relationship any better myself. This is WONDERFUL. :D

Another fave. :3

WOAH.



THAT WAS AMAZING.


beautiful poem.

Man, poems usually bore me to death! But this one, I couldn't stop reading! My sister asked me to show her some of my favorite stories, and I showed her this. She liked it too!

this is really good!
write more soon!

okay, so normally i despise rhyming poems. not sure why, i just do.

that said,

i think i can make an exception for this one.

i liked it. really did. mhm.

:D

-hearts-
xsyntheticsmile

Man, are you a poet? That was GREAT! I'm not normally a huge fan of poems, but that was really good.