I found the symbolism very striking. The contrast between the wolf and the rose lends itself to the reality that no one is all of anything. Some may portray a tough exterior while keeping secret the delicate rose petals hidden beneath. I found the story insightful and singulary emblematic of the ongoing human struggle to conform to the mores of society while still attempting to quench the thirst of personal desire. Well thought out and developed short episode that infuses light into the fragile relationship between want and need.

One to five percent? That makes no sense, haha, sorry.

Anyways, it was a really good story. Very realistic and I loved the fact that the whole story was a metaphor. It was really nice.

To be honest, I didn't feel a lot of flowing in your words and sentences, but I don't really have any advice on that.

Either way, great job. :)

-Dana.

That was sad, but lovely ;_;

wow now I know why Michael liked this story! It rocks... it made me think... -_- thanks now im thinking... it made me a bit sad... Im not telling you why it just sort of what I went through... its a good story...touching... *sob* thanks u made me cry...

Hey Hillary Wuts Up Umm I decided to come on fanfiction 2 c if u had n e new stories and I guess u do I liked it I think it's good Hope 2 read another 1 soon

PS sorry about the spelling but it's a lot easier and when I chat that's how I type things out Bye

really good..i really liked it.

Aw! That was so heartbreaking! But I loved it, nonetheless; I needed to read something bittersweet to inspire me to write my fics! *HeHeHe*

What a story!
Remind me of the song when that guy sing "my lover is getting married, but the groom isn't me." It's so painful.

I really like your fic.

That's sad about what happened to Eriol, but good news for Syaoran though.

nice :P maybe a litlle longer?