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I never read shoujo-ai up until this story. I have to say, you've done an amazing job. You've completely won me over. This story is incredibly well-written, and my eyes were completely glued to the screen.

I've also read and enjoyed your other stories. Keep up the stellar work!

Fucking gorgeous. Excuse my language. Gah! This story is what made me fall in love with Tifa/Aerith in the first place.

The first time I read this story I had to read it in a rush cuz I was quite busy, but I just couldn't stop. Now I'm re-reading it and I realized I missed alot the first time around. I love the way you write. You have a way with words. It has so much emotion in it. Someone to somebody. I think everyone can relate to this. The titles for the 1st and 2nd chapters were cute. The Someone and The Somebody. Didn't notice that the first time around. I was kinda wondering whose monologue the prologue was. Now I get it. Guess I'm a bit slow. P But on to the next chapters!

Ah, this story. This wonderful, painful story. I keep reading, leaving, coming back... This would be my third attempt at finishing it, which I find pathetic. I love it, but the night ends too soon and I have to try to at least look awake, then the next day there are other distractions...

Anyway. After re-reading at least 1/4th of it and finally finding my place, here we are again. I'll just review all the chapters with this one, shall I? As I get to them. I'll admit, the nicknames annoy me. Still, they can be ignored easily enough. That loop, with Tseng, Sephiroth, screaming... It's chilling. I love the dreams as much as I hate them.

Chapter 16

Gah. Parts of that chapter I remembered, parts I didn't. This is what I get for being gone for so long.

Chapter 17

Now this, I haven't read. But I'm worried, so worried. And angry at Cloud, and annoyed with Tifa, and wondering...

Chapter 18

Sadness and angst, and death, oh my. I was hoping to avoid the latter, but I suppose that's the price to pay for reading this. Oh- you have a DA? I must go look. But no, not getting distracted, not...gah. ...I got distracted. Okay, I'm back. That one little comparison doodle was amazingly fun.

Chapter 19

Hm. I really do/don't want to just stop now. I could save myself the emotional doom sure to follow. But, as I've never played the game, I wonder. Was that part of it? All of that? No, can't be, then...deviation? From the path, I mean. Ah, hope.

And...here's the angst. Aerith is extremely perceptive, but to do that and then just leave...I wonder if that would only make it worse. And when Cloud wakes up, who'll snap first?

Chapter 20

Oh, box. Gimme a box. Darnit, I don't want this. I really don't. So I will, because hey, I got this far.

Cloud's so like a child. They all are, really, all but her, but somehow he manages to annoy me the most. I don't know, it's...hm. Oh...gah. Bad, no, not happening. Not. -insert denial here-

Chapter 21

...So. So.

Chapter 22

Oh yes, I cried. And laughed, and spun around (at least inside my head), and re-read the entries a second and third time. That was, in every way, worth it. Is it odd that I'm proud for finishing it? Just...thanks. That was brilliant.

Naolin

For the past, i believe four days, i have been reading your story based on the events in FF7, and i must say its beautiful. I've read stories that brought tears to my eyes, but never one that touched me so much, such as yours. To think i was prepared for it was highly at my fault. You wrote a wonderful story, one that i will not forget. So i thank you for bringing this story to life, and that every tear i spilled was well worth it.

I'm just happy I found and read this, though I've never played the game myself. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us. Yeah, thank you so much.

This fiction is definitely the best FF7 fiction I have read on this site. You captured amazingly both characters' emotions and feeling. You portrayed them very well and managed to get there relationship to evolve gradually in intensity.

Great work !

Love your story! ;)

Wow..just wow. You have certainly done it again. My eyes STILL aren't dry!

I am SO glad I finally finished this story. It was so much worth the read! But wow, what a rollercoaster of emotions! I can't wait to delve into Heartless Love now! Though I'm not promising reviews on every chapter on that one XD Not because I don't love you :P Just because I never know what to say! You do such amazing writing it leaves me speechless!

Great story though, this should be canon! :)

There are no words to properly describe how I feel! I mean it's so sad that Tifa has lost Aerith and part of you wishes that she could just go on and join her in the Lifestream, but on the other hand to see Aerith willing her on and telling her she's got so much life left to live...

It's definitely a mix of emotions, and yes I've cried through this chapter. Happy? XD

*takes that box of complimentary tissues and cries!*

Wow! Never expected Aerith to make that move!

FYI, though, there's a spot in there I noticed where you have "eyes" instead of "eyed" that sounds a bit awkward. Might wanna have a look when you can :)

Onto chapter 20!

Wow, it just keeps getting better and better! I would so read the next chapter right now if I didn't have to go to work!

O.O Cait is a spy! *never got this far in the game, don't shoot me!* Wow, talk about the plot thickening!