So oddly satisfying. Lain's atmosphere is undoubtedly present from the beginning until the end; the writing style is fitting, and the manner in which you describe what is taking place slices a creepy smile on my face. Thank you for the very, very good read. (:

Lovely piece...reminiscent of Lain's incoherent babblings of despair. The simplicity suits it. :) Great imagery, taps right into the eeriness that is Lain...

i love it!

Whoa. Now I wanna be killed by powerlines rather than a nuke.

Beautifully written and perfectly Lain. If the series had gone any farther than it did I could see this being a part of it.

I really liked it. It seemed like something that would actually be in Lain.

I loved it! As random and confusing as SEL originally is...

Please write more, A-chan!

dna-chan

I liked this.

Hardcore,that was more.

Ya know what?

That was cool

Ya know what?

That was cool

um... deep, cool, write more.

Dude, that was deep.

I love second-person POV. Can never pull it off. Yer good, in creepy, warped, twisted kinda way, which is really the best way. Have cookies.

that was kinda creepy but please write another one ur really good! _