Wow. Well written. I adored the theme too. I think it's a bit OOC, though.

Musafreen

*sighs* is there a background story on this? why's timmy in jail?

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brittney

*grin* now that last line was FABULOUS... and over 10 words! you should be very proud. only 800 more until you hit the 20 mark...

Depressing, but enjoyable!

That was really, really good, but so very sad! *wipes tear* I loved the last line! It kinda made me feel like crying ...

nice job. :) Artemis is a little out-of-character, but it's very well written!! I like the emotion, portraying that even a genius and mastermind, under all hardness, still feels. good job. thanks!

~Choco~

That was really sad! I loved it though :) Especially the dialogue between Timmy and Arty. It's definitely something Timmy would've done. I really do love Arty's thoughts in the paranthesis. It was a nice touch.

~ Simmy

Nice job. I especially liked the last line "Artemis held his mother and rocked her through the sobs until the sedatives killed the tears."

Really nice.

My one complaint would be the formatting, I don't think it did your work justice.

-Feud

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*cries*
That's sad... (shut up to anyone who didn't like that)

Interesting how you used dialogue to tell the unfold the story. The plot was a bit simple and predictable, but what I *really* liked were the thoughts in the brackets; THOSE were GOOD.

It's definitely interesting...well-written, too. I wouldn't say that loved it, but I don't have any complaints. It was enjoyable and original; I'd like to see some more from you.

Hey, BK.

You know I love this fic, but you know, it's always nice to boost the review count, eh? Great fic which has some powerful moments.

Your dialogue is mostly fantastic, but if i had a bit of advice, I would say... dont let it become too prdictable. when I was reading it the first time, I felt I knew what characters were going to say.

But then, that could just be a sign that it's *right.*

I hope your produce more in the coming months, and I hope that at some stage you'll allow me to beta for you again. You're fantastic writer, and - despite all our arguments - it's a privellege to talk to you and learm from you. (Even if you are just a scouse twit;))

Mozzie.

glad to see you're back. The story was a bit depressing... (though I think most persons associated with Crim and that group tend to favor that ;) ) but I liked it. It was pretty believable, and it makes sense. I like how you protrayed Artemis Fowl Senior. Very in character. Is there another chapter coming?

O.R.

ANOTHER biblical one. (with another biblical allusion as your title!)

so pensive.

i kind of prefer humor. :)