can't wait 2 c more ^_^

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Nice one yes not much impact but this series is still really good so keep going. post soon

Sweet! Though, you should have gone deeper into the story. Like is Ursa missing but not dead? Zuko has never said anything about his mother.
But you do have a point. Zuko's cousin, who was probably like you said, almost like a brother to him, was killed by the "enemy" and Katara's mother was killed by the "enemy".

lHey there! Metai ae! Lauren here. I hope you're doing well.ike it if yo uread my story, I'll Always Protect You. It's really sweet and it reminded me of it.
Lauren I just read your Avatar story and thought it was GREAT! I really enjoyed it. I would really like