 Wren Inu-Chu RyuChi 2009-06-11 . chapter 11WOW Sesshomaru pissy is awesome. i think you should continue this story if you want to. |
 yakunantenshi 2007-12-01 . chapter 11poor kaggie ... where's yasha ... and where is sesshy going ... will kagome remember every thing ... plz up date soon |
 monkey-101 2007-08-01 . chapter 11wicked story. whens the next chapter goin to be updated?. can you please update soon. thank you and please update soon. well done congrats. |
 e baby 2007-06-19 . chapter 11 this is a really good story it would be even better if u finished it or put up the other chapter!;) |
 emmyjenny 2007-01-25 . chapter 11sorry i didn't review sooner my laptop was acting up! i broke-ed it! so my parents got me a new one Cause it ran out of warranty and it was just easier than paying to fix it :) my new laptop is soo shiny, smells soo new and white lol.. i love this chapter :) soo many twists and turns... good luck with the next chapter and THANKYOU for updating :) oh to joys of reading :)
in Australia right now its Australia day and we do all these stereotypical things like drink beer (not me though i am only 17) in stubies (beer holders so your hands don't get cold while insulating the beer), BBQ's in every back yard, fireworks, party's and well just random fun stuff... its also a public holiday :) so its fun all around :) BU-UT i've got school coming up (darn you school) and homework! (darn you math teacher!)... i'd just like to finish with I LOVE YOUR STORYS!1!1!... and finally UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! :) |
 Sesshy's Princess Kagome 2007-01-21 . chapter 11Great fic! i hope kagome gets her memory back soon! update asap! |
 Kagome.is.better 2007-01-19 . chapter 11Ah amnesia that sux!! cant wait for the next chappy plez update! |
 Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2007-01-19 . chapter 11very wicked chapter... never give up no matter what |
 Archangel's Requiem 2007-01-19 . chapter 1O.O this is so cool! i really like this story, even if it is a futur fic! but anyways i really like it. toodles!
Archangel's Requiem |
 asuka-2004 2007-01-19 . chapter 11update :D wohoo! *dances* |
 -a-Lost-Cause-317- 2007-01-19 . chapter 11Hey great chapter ... I really wonder what its like to have amesia ... Well Update soon ... |
 Red-Smartiez 2007-01-18 . chapter 11PWEZ CONTINUE N THNK U! =)0
P.S. add la rape scene to add a more "horrory" touch it, if i may suggest *muahahahahahaahha!* |
 emmyjenny 2006-12-26 . chapter 10i'm really happy how you did this chapter :) you've made its so good :)
i think that maybe now you should get Rin, Inuyasha and Jaken in trouble...
in the next chapter (if you want [i'm just giving you ideas]) it could be about the strong guy (possibly Naraku) and Saito having an argument about how Saito killed Kagome (they haven't heard that she's still alive) Naraku didn't want her dead cause he 'wants/lusts for' her (cause she looks like Kikyou who he 'accidently' killed when he got angry with her)
anyway at the end of the chapter you could say ..'..halfway through his sentence the door banged open and harsh light flooded in. when their eyes adjusted they saw the silhouette of a tall man, long light coloured hair, glowing blood red eyes-swerling with emotions, panting and extremely angry. the man barked out "where the HELL is-"
"we know" Saito Interrupted with with a sinister smirk "you'll just have to figure it out for your self... Inuyasha" '
Muwhaahahahaha! i think its a perfect ending so suspenseful... but then again it might be going against your story plot or what ever :) (this is just an idea you don't have to use it)
update :) k? |
 readerthatlovestoread 2006-12-22 . chapter 10great |
 readerthatlovestoread 2006-12-22 . chapter 2okay |