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Reviews For: Bento Before and After

Neko
2007-07-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it! it's really sweet ^-^
hiei9934
2006-11-19
ch 1,
abuseI liked the description you used when you were writing about the embraces and hugs. ^_^ Very cute!
Ro-chan13
2006-10-29
ch 1,
abuseAww, that was so cute. Got me into a fit of giggles, it did. Really am enjoying your stuff, so yeah. Keep writing!
Serigala
2006-09-30
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. It was sweet when Watanuki asked what Doumeki cared about and he answerded "You." *enchanted*

The ending was great. talking like they always do. Awesome.
year if the rat it's true
2006-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOVE IT. i tell you.
Alana-StarSugarCat
2006-07-30
ch 1,
abuseAlana: cute cute CUTE

Evo: meh
bloodytwistedangel
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseYes. I was supposed to read TRC KuroFaiAshu fic, but I go by chapters, read what I want, review, and go onto the next story... I'm that kind of person. I'll work my way there eventually. (determined)

SO~! Well, Do-Re-Mi, wonderful fluff with characers IC. Damnit, whenever I write fluff, I get the urge to write lovey-dovey stuff... (sighs) Anyhow, different from what I expected from the summary and I think you should be complimented on such. It's always nice to be surprised. (hee)

The end! The ends are an especially critical point in my opinion. They leave off for the next chappie or they tie-things-together. (glompsies) Yesh, yesh, wonderful end.

Only comment: Wata-Chan feels like crying...? Hmm. It meshes with the fic, but I just can't see the crying part. (Personal Opinion) Ah, and I thank your genius for comparing Domeki to a samurai! I knew someone was going to do that someday. (giggles)

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan has the energy of a nuclear reactor!
Squibling
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was pretty good. It was cute, but not in an extreme kind of way. Now you should write about the festival!
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