From what I read so far I really think this story will be really awesome. And the best part is that it's not like every other OC story out there. :] I mean even though there's only two chapters I can just tell ya know? Well, anyways.. can't wait for the next part and keep up the good work. :D

Awesome, please post again soon.

update soon!

not a bad start! keep going!

Hey just wannted to let you know that this sounds like the story could be really good hope you keep writing(ok the sounded corny but whatever)so if you wanna talk just e-mail me -byez Jade