Please finish up!

I am sure you are a good writer and your story is appreciated by many readers. But it seems your views on shipping and characters and killing off innocents are too different from mine and I would never endorse the kind of stuff you have pulled off in this fic of yours. Not to say that those are unethical or improper or bad or something. They are perfectly fine in their own sense, just that it's probably just me who does not have much of a proclivity towards that kind of stuff

So without much delay, I wish to say good luck for the future and hope you get more people who like your stories.

Imagine my surprise when I open my mailbox and see one chapter update after another for your story. I like it so far, but it seem that you paid less attention to detail as you got closer to the end. The Voldemort-Harry battle was kinda short too. I hope you can explain that. Will Sirius stay with the Tonks' or will Tasha spill the truth? I'm surprised she's so calm about the entire matter, but then again, Tonks is her sister and Hermione lives with her so I guess it's not so unusual. I'm glad you're almost finished though. I've enjoyed your story so far and can't wait until the end. Please do a sequel, I'd read it, if nobody else does. Oh, and what about Celia and Draco, will they be in your epilogue? You haven't talked about them for a long time. Update soon!

I'm very anxious for your next chapter. I would dearly love to write more, but unfortunately, I don't have a lot of time. I still think Dumbledore should've been able to do it, but I guess it's okay for Dumbledore to do it. Update soon!

You've been updating like crazy. I'd read the next chapter, but I don't have enough time right now, so I'll just comment on this one for now. I like how you brought Andry in, but I don't think she would've ever left Tasha and Hermione home alone until Ted arrived. I'm sure you're going to explain what's really going on with Harry in the next chapter, because I have a feeling Andry has to be right about Harry's condition. Nicely done. I'll try to review your next chapter soon.

An update! I'm amazed. You haven't updated in forever! Well, I'm sure we know what's going to happy to Sirius next. For Harry, I'm not so sure. I hope you're going to explain all of this madness soon because it looks like your story's going somewhere. I'll be having an update soon as well, so look forward to it.

good chapter, bye

good chapters

I think I'm going to kill you. Honestly, it's no offense meant to you, but i believe I'm going to kill you if you don't tell us what the heck happened when Alex adopted Harry. I read the whole chapter and I still don't know. I'm very irritated. Sorry about your school situation and don't harp on me about deleting a chapter of Viator. I know what I'm doing, it's just taking me a while to do it. So who was tailing Alex and Harry in Diagon Alley? And what was up with the meeting between Celia, Draco, and Harry? i think that you made Harry slightly uncharacteristic when he found out he was a wizard. Please make a Hermione chapter. I want to see her try to escape from the Tonks'.

You might hate me, but Hermione was a little OOC, but I suppose that's what makes her a fanon character. How is she going to get out? She's still unwell and I bet Andry's put up wards around the room so she can't escape. But Hermione's resourceful. Trouble in marriage, I see. You know, hiding something as important as this from your husband is rather monumental, but Andry is a Black, and they can be pretty sneaky. Who is this Natasha? Another character you've created just for the heck of it or...do you have something else in mind? I can feel it in your soul, wait...that's kind of scary. Anyway, I'll try to put up an update of Dog of the Founders soon. I chose the name Rebecca because of it's meaning. I'm starting to like the dark/cynical names. Pretty good chapter, but you should try to make them longer.

good chapter

cool

Hmm...erasing a magical signature? Not exactly sure what to say to that. This has to be causing complications. Is it dangerous or...I really have no idea, I've never read anything like that before. Wasn't Alex's name on the documents that he gave Callie? And who exactly is Alex anyway? I mean, is he like the Alex Potter that you created before or have you made him into something else. What was up with the long gap in between updates? I would've expected something better from you. Can't wait till you put up Hermione and I liked the way you handled Harry's and Alex's relationship. Harry's trusting, but not too trusting. He still hasn't told him about the Dursleys abuse. I wonder if...never mind...update soon.

*applause* Very intesresting story you've got going here. I won't deny that I'm a bit confused, but I suppose it'll all e cleared up eventually.

good chaters