this was a great story.

that's a good ending, I admit it left me wanting more of a story on how this turned out in the long run, but i'll fill in the rest.

Great story. I loved the way how Clark slowly showed her his true self.

That was lovely. Sweet, fluffy, a great happy ending. Just what we all need :)

... You seriously over-rated this. I don't know if I'd even call it a T, let alone an M...

Nice work, though. I've always loved the Lois and Clark take that Clark is the person and Superman the disguise, and it has always irritated me how Clark is always portrayed as a disguise in the movies.

I love it! Plrase reconsider about not continuing. You have done a great job of focusing on Clark rather than Superman and what makes him the wonderful man he is.

Mona

Aww you've got to update asap! This fanfic is great and I think it's great that you've given Clark more character than what is reflected in Superman Returns. Please update soon, PLEASE!

OMG this story is so AMAZING! You HAVE to update soon!

A lovely story, and one I certainly want to see continued, but the end of this chapter seems a bit abrupt. In my opinion I think Lois would spend much more time avoiding the issue, trying to work around it, and just being all-around stubborn about admitting her feelings to herself.

That and some other minor issues aside, it's a wonderful story that I hope you update soon.

^^ please update really really soon! i can't wait to read what happens next! lol. great job!

No! Cliffy!

But, what a beautiful story-this is the kinda thing I've been looking for. I just hope Lois' reaction won't be bad, as they're just getting so sweet XD

Please write more, and soon! :]

What the..? Don't leave it at that! Great story, hope to read more soon.

Argh! DOn't stop there! It's just getting good! Since my fussing isn't going to make more words appear on the screen, I'll just say that I'm loving this story and hope that we won't have to wait so long for the next update.

Oh, wow... what a cliffie. Wonder if Lois will be mad at him now or she will simply melt into his arms... Please, update soon!

That's a great start for a story. I love the "suddenly bold" Clark :D