r u srsly finished the whole story!? No u can't! it is prob one of the best ones I've read.

Besides - b4 u can end it u have to explain what or who made them switch places and how when or if the switched back - or else it kind of ends in a very akward cliff-hanger. The last sentence was deff a cliffy and if u rnt planning on making a sequel u cant end a story with a cliffy.

good, but kinda wierd story!

I really like this time travel story! Good Job!

Hey that wasn't a good ending. I really liked how it was going. but you aren't intrested in it no more so we can't make you keep writting it. I checked the reviews and the last time someone reviewed was exactly a year ago. I thought that was cool and so I'm telling you. but who knows if you check on review or not. But anyways I loved the fic. It was great.

Perfect love kills all fear

Hey. :)

Saw that you got the tied award with me this year, and I took a gander over at this fic. :)

The body switch idea was an interesting one and I think you've pulled it off quite well. :D

wow great story. Very unigue idea i usually don't like sci-fiction idea but i liked this story.Probally because its dealt with the Shepards (one of my fave charchters in the books.)Please keep writting more story's about Tim and Angel .

I love that you ended it in a way that was unexpected; it added so much to the story.

I also thought it was incredible how they both went through the stages of grief -- anger, denial, acceptance in settling into their new lives.

As always, your stories show that some things in life just don't have explainations. Excellent.

Actually, I liked the ending. I really couldn't think of a better way, so props. : )

I do have to say, though, that I like how you write Tim...I want to say Timothy *so* bad.

Cheers!

The end? Hm. So Angela and Lauren never did return to their normal lives... Lauren seems happy enough, though. Angela... well, who knows what she's up to. I doubt she'd be happy anywhere.

I like the interaction you've got between Lauren and Tim, and what you had Tim say about how he "would probably like having Lauren as a sister better anyway" or something. Haha.

I can't really think of anything more to say, other than that I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

I'm looking forward to reading more from you (perhaps that joint story you and Artemis are thinking of?)

: )

It was a good chapter. I liked seeing what was going on with Angela and how she was fitting in but still retaining some of herself (i.e. the stolen earrings).

Anyway, I would say more if I could, but I'm in a rush.

I'm looking forward to more.

: )

I actually liked that chapter. It's sort of interesting to see what Angela's up to...

please dont end it soon!

Wow, this is really good! Please continue!

Good chapter. I love the beginning with Tim.

Well, I'll be sad to see it end, but if it's done, it's done.'

: )

Well that switched things up a bit, didn't it? I was thinking "wait, so is this the end?" And I love the emotions you have Lauren at the end. She must be so frustrated.

I actually liked how you did this chapter. You had some parts of it very broken where it was a little confusing as to what was going on, but it felt natural with what was happening in the story.

Anyway, keep it up. You're doing a great job with this.

: )