Not too bad, quite cute!

You should be careful with capitalizations though.

Briliant so far but i really want to hear what happens next

It was cute! But I think you should of ended it with the “That we’ll always have each other…” bit and shouldn't have talked about Riku. It kinda ruins the lovely sweet feel at the end.

Me: Poor Riku. Oh well, he'll be fine.
Riku: What?! I'm kind of mad here! She could hae been mine! MINE! ALL MINE! BWAHAHAAHA!
Me: ..?
Sora: (walks into room)Hi Riku.
Riku: HI?! THAT'S ALL YOU CAN SAY?
Sora: Um..?
Update soon! :D This was really cute! *snuggles chapter*
-Me :)

I guess I could make it a bit longer. I thought it was pretty complete as is...leaves you thinkin'. oh, and I got the dress idea, lol cuz I tried to make the costume and that was ALWAYS happening to me!

hey is this finished or is it going to continue? i hope u continue the story it is good!!

Aaweh it's cute. But the way you did that part with riku, you could make it longer. I kno wI'd be sure to read it if you did, but it's cute as a one shot too

HAHAHAHA OMGZ THAT FUNNY