This is probably my favorite pre-game fic. You did really well with keeping them in character too! I personaly liked the part where Sora freaked Riku out by popping his head out the crack .

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Aww! This is such a cute story! XD

Putting into favorites...

Hahahahahaha they're going to hurt themselves even worse trying to open that door, helmet or no!

Little Sora, Riku, and Kairi are just too funny. That last bit was priceless.

I loved reading this, it relaly made me smile!

Yay it's been FFN'd!

On my faves for sure ;) Very awesome use of my insane challenge. I bow to your uberness!

LOL! That was cute! They really seemed their age! Okay, I liked this story! :D

-Me

it really captures Sora and Riku's childishness. Sora just seems so oblivious to everything. keep up the good work!

1st review... I hope. This is too cute! It's so sweet, and it really gets that immature Sora bit. (Huh... what don't girls like?)

Although, I was never afraid of cold, wet and dirty. I was the mud pie princess as a kid! Hee hee... Dark, though... still can get me.

Was this a one-shot? Regardless, it's really cute. Keep up the good work!