Haha! :D that was awesome! I loved the last paragraph the most! That was funny.

Aw! I love it! It's so adorable!

This is a really sweet and cute story, and I love how you added a spark of humour in it! _

That was great and cute, I loved it

The part where Kyo came in was BRILLIANT and made this so much better. I started cracking up. What would we do without Kyo xD

This was a very sweet story by the way, and I loved it so much _

love it it so good

OMG! The ending was hilarious and i loved and i think its a great fanfiction. ur an excellent writer as well i think.

Aw, I liked it. It was sweet :) For some reason when Kyou said 'Now that's not something I really want to see first thing in the morning' it made me laugh :D

I really want you write about their first kiss! I like very much this history! see ya!

Nhya very cute! \o/

I totally loved this, even if I've never seen Furuba. I've missed you Miss Carissa and I'm glad you're back. D

i say you should write about their first kiss. a first kiss is always adorable.

Squee! I love HaruYuki!

You did a really good job writing this, and I enjoyed reading it. Great job!

It was interesting and very good for a oneshot, please continue on with your authoring skills.

That was very good. I think you should wright some more on it. I realy like the idea.