|Reviews for The Inevitable Struggle|
| Alexxis T. Swan 10/31/10 . chapter 1
Short but still tells a specific story. I guess its up to the AsukaxRyou fans to interpret completely. Nice drabble.
| Z3R0-TH3-H3R0 5/7/10 . chapter 1
nice short sweet and to the point
| Hekate 6/11/07 . chapter 1
O; good job.
| kat yared 12/20/06 . chapter 1
I like it. Short but sweet.
| Shineko-chan 8/21/06 . chapter 1
umm im not really good with japanese names
| Story Weaver1 7/18/06 . chapter 1
'That' at the lighthouse that's a nice poetic touch.
| Blu3 Gaz3tt3 7/17/06 . chapter 1
I agree with SwordPrincess. This is the shortest story I've ever read. .
Ryou x Asuka Always Together Forever!
| PrincessofLilacs 7/17/06 . chapter 1
ıt was short... but ınterestıng! I hope there ıs more comıng up where thıs came from?*g*
And ıf so, make ıt longer!:)
| November Alley 7/17/06 . chapter 1
That must be the shortest story I ever read.
And more surprising, it's great.
| battlegirl15 7/13/06 . chapter 1
| Pidge-san 7/12/06 . chapter 1
Oh, it's a drabble. That's why it's so short.:P
r_r I didn't look at the word count, and the title really made me think it was going to be somewhat long.
Yeah, it's a little OOC for both Ryou and Asuka, but nothing too bad. I kinda liked it.
Good job on the drabble, Yami. It's nice seeing something GX-oriented from you, after such a long time. Hope to see some more from ya soon.:)
P.S.-COOKIES SAYS SUPER SMASH BROTHERS...MELEE!Pidge-san
| nevermore199 7/12/06 . chapter 1
Uh, people? It's a DRABBLE. Drabbles are short. They always have been short, and they always will be short. If you don't like short things, then why the heck did you even click on the link? That's why there's a little thing under the summary that says "Word Count."
And, Wynn? Yami-san never SAID he expected a ton of reviews. He posted it so that we could read it. He doesn't have to keep it on Livejournal if he doesn't feel like it. Geez.
Alright, now that I'm done ranting, on to the actual review.
Yami-san, I thought it was very good. Thank you for writing it.
| PacWoman 7/12/06 . chapter 1
It was good, for a 100 word story, it was too short for my taste though. It would be very good if it was a bit longer.
| PurificationArrow 7/12/06 . chapter 1
It was... ok.
I'm not saying that it was absolutely terrible, just a little ooc. Ryo/Zane being him, he wouldn't really touch another person unless it was absolutely neccesary.
But still, it wasn't the worst thing I've read, trust me. I have read things a hundred times worse. So compared to those other people, this was good.
| Wynn the Wind Charmer 7/12/06 . chapter 1
Too short, too short. I hate it when people like write these 100 word drabbles and expect a ton of reviews for a bullshit that's barely a story. Post it on livejournal and keep it here.