can't wait till it's done! ^_^

GREAT STORY! IT ROCKS! UPDATE SOON! Well she could be asking if they could help her find Rossete so they can become one like Roxas and Sora.

Yay! *dances all around* Good story, Good story, yayayayayay! Ok, a "little" over excited there...anyways great story so far! Please update soon! *adds to favs*

dangit, continue! I want to know why she's there! ^_^

This is really good, and really intriguing. Keep going wiht th elciff hangers. even though it makes people mad (including me) its good that they're mad becuase they want to read more! Excellent story! ^_^

Good chapter, but you need to captilize any world's names like the World That Never Was. Anyways, maybe she could have come there looking for her Somebody or Roxas. I'm not really sure, but this is getting good. Update soon.

I like this story! It kind of makes Sora look stupid, but hey, who can help poking fun at the kid? He's like a poke- fun-at magnet. Anyway, I liked your story, and hope that you follow through with your quick updates.Great Story! ^~^

This was the best chapter yet!! It really explains a lot, plus it's funny! This story is turning out to be really good! Thanks for updating!

this is good. my advice is that you should go back and look for mistakes before you submit it. update soon

Cool! good but i think roxas is a little out of character in this i think whoa i just said i think twice okay it wasn't that funny did u know that run on sentences are annoying?

Pretty good! Your not the best writer in the world (no offense) but pretty good! I've gotta say you should make the chapters a little longer next time. and please use more detail! now i'm not trying to be mean or anything but please consider what i have said. thanks!

Cool! Nice story so far! ;)

this chap was good, roxas called sora a bone head and an idiot. sora- 0, roxas- 2 ;p

the concept is good but you have some errors, like you need to put commas and periods after the dialogue. but good start and i like it. update soon

I despise cliff hangers.