YC: I loved this! You really played both Oriya and Muraki perfectly! There's just not enough well-written fics about these two...loved it!

Beautiful... and very twisted and chilling, just like the good ol' doctor. There's nothing I could pick at... you portray everyone so well, and you really set the atmosphere... wow.

Not to mention it has Oriya! ...he's my fave.

Definite fave.

Hwoarang Girl

wow...I'm glad I stumbled across you...I love your fics! _

whe! I LOVE MurakixOriya

Dark and twisted. Just like Muraki.I like it _. and..poor Oriya indeed *grin*

OH MY GOD!

Please, please please please onegai kudasai and so on write more! I will love you forever...that is the BEST Muraki fic I have ever read and have I mentioned I love Oriya-sama very very very much... so will you pleas please please write more? I can't get enough of your characterizations, they were perfect and...and...and...and! :sigh: Anyway, I now worship the ground you walk on and I will send you a gift-wrapped Muraki (if I can catch the insane little...) if you will write more.

Sankyuu very much for listening to my bouncy little rant. Kage.

I appluad you! A beautiful, glorious Muraki/Oriya fic. Loved your writing and love the pairing. There should be more stories like this out there

I don't think you should worry; they seemed perfectly in character. And more fics should have Oriya, he's very interesting isn't he?

AHH, I loved this. Oriya is my favorite character, though I really don't know too much about him. He was perfect here, and I loved the way he isn't weak. He thinks when it comes to Muraki, though I guess they couldn't resist one another for TOO long. ) Really good!

hmm... sweet, muraki's thoughts regarding his friend. loved the kiss ;)

::shivers:: Evil, evil man. But so much fun to write about in 1st person. You have a scarilly accurate insight into his mind, in my opinion. I don't know whether I should congratulate you, or commit you... I think congratulate Very nicely done.

You did an excellent job on the relationship between Muraki and Oriya. I enjoyed this fic very much!

Amushiroui... Well, good job on it! I liked the way that you discribed everything. Write more stuff please.

I am not usually a big fan of the Oriya x Muraki match (Tsuzuki x Muraki forever!) But I must confess I really loved this fic. Everyone was perfectly in Character and loved the interaction between Oriya and Muraki. A very good job.