Good plot, i like how everything is being tied around your heroine. I look forward to seeing how this story plays out.

i absolutely love this story. naraku(i think?) finally meeting kagome and disguised him self as Sesshomaru!luv it! although i have one problem, you just left us hanging!so please update soon

After so long you have finally updated! I had to re-read the chapters to refresh my memory. XD Love the chapter and I hope you update a little quicker this time.

Ja Ne!

Japanese Dreamer

wow great chapter and chiffie

I can't wait to read next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Love it! She is meeting his beast right? Can't wait for her reaction!

AH <3

oh! **
Update soon

ohmegod! :O

You went from past tense to present tense, so watch out for that. Ex: The frantic Baroness rambles on as panic ensues within the Nyuyoda household. Busying maids run about, butlers struggle to find the right placement for the silverware and the chefs yell and shout for more ingredients. Kikyou spends more hours in front of the mirror fixing a non-existent flaw in her hair while Baron Nyuyoda goes to answer the door.



You also did this third party, narrator thing, like it was a play instead of a story. Ex: As the sun sank deep into the horizon, the moon soon took its place, hanging high in the sky with its gentle glow. It is now seven o’clock, an hour until the promised meeting of the Baron and two princes.

Other than that, I say good job and get with that update

so that wasn't sesshoumaru?

well update! ^ ^

UPDATE!

I'm still interested 8D I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Thought Kagome's terrified, I wish that were me XD Hehe
Mwhahaha, Kagome-baachan! :P Sango and her good ideas *shakes head*
Inuyasha's missing a great night though
I normally don't say this, but;
Update soon!
If not
I will kick your ** with a plush cupcake.
Promise :)

Freaky. You did an excellent job but what the hell is wrong with Sesshomaru?