Jack Harkness as godfather? Are you sure that's smart?

Great story.

I like how u write and the basic idea is really good... But, theres always but aint there? Soooo but, its a bit too "epic" for me y'know jacks too ooc, doctor is too frowning... Y know, so im so sorry, but i end my journey with u now, see you n good luck :)

I liked the original better... Sorry, but i get this odd feeling when someone says theyre pregnant, this impuls to run u know... Scared n stuff, even if its just a story, like the person whos pregnant is about to die, well to be drained of their lifesource... Aaanyway, i will read on to see if its getting better, u wrote well.

bravo

GO ROSE!

Ive read DW stores where rose is the BW and she cant do anything unless she mad or s out of cantrol...BUT I LOVE UR ROSE :D

jack's ego can out shine the empire state building

great story

Doomsday should of ended like this..everytime I see a picture of Billy piper..i see Rose, on Doomsday, crying. and i want to cry :(

This was Fantastic! I love how you made the Bad Wolf a part of Rose like that. I'm really looking forward to the sequel! This is a major favorite!

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That's an absoloutely FANTASTIC story! I love it! Infact, I think I'm gonna favourite it...Yep, definitely.

This story is so good!

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

i like it it's really really good