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Reviews For: Routine

Jazhara7
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abuseSo sad...It made me cry.

But also beautiful.


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DhtrofIsis
2006-08-24
ch 1,
abuseThis probably the best stuff I've seen you put up. The reveal is slow and you don't overtell the story. Switching from Carth to Mission was a nice transition, and the flashbacks fit perfectly into the flow of the story. If your not proud of this peice, you should be. Good job.
Child-of-the-Dawn
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abusewow. Thats so sad...but..fitting in a way. Poor Revan having to die. But Mission as her daughter's confidant and Jolee as the girl's Master, now theres hope for the galaxy! Excellent story!
Gabrielle Lupin
2006-08-11
ch 1,
abuseThat was a really nice, sweet one shot. I liked how you played it out that Revan was alive, it was very well written.
Sundiz-Star
2006-07-16
ch 1,
abuseAw. That is so, so sweet! Aww... I might start crying now... *sniff* Awsome ^^
Selena Mars
2006-07-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseJust...wow! I mean your stories reach above and beyond expectations when I read them. They are truly lovely and I wish only the best. I hope that you can still do Beautiful Darkness because I am craving for more. This story did make me cry. Keep up the good work!
Artemis-Delilah-Avari
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseWow. If you made Sandra Evans cry, you have a good story. This was really good. Sad, but good.
Sandra Evans
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseI bawled like a baby. I'm not sure whther I should strangle you or add you to my Favorite Author's list.
Sugi
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseWAH! Seriously... so sad, but so beautiful... :(
Hangman By Cent
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseHA! *breathless from running* i got here first! lol i already told you this, but this is a lovely, tear-jerkey oneshot featuring our fav characters and a new addition to the family. two thumbs WaY up! ^_^
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