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| Jazhara7 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseSo sad...It made me cry. But also beautiful. - :`( :`( :`( :`( :`( :`( :`( |
| DhtrofIsis 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseThis probably the best stuff I've seen you put up. The reveal is slow and you don't overtell the story. Switching from Carth to Mission was a nice transition, and the flashbacks fit perfectly into the flow of the story. If your not proud of this peice, you should be. Good job. |
| Child-of-the-Dawn 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusewow. Thats so sad...but..fitting in a way. Poor Revan having to die. But Mission as her daughter's confidant and Jolee as the girl's Master, now theres hope for the galaxy! Excellent story! |
| Gabrielle Lupin 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really nice, sweet one shot. I liked how you played it out that Revan was alive, it was very well written. |
| Sundiz-Star 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseAw. That is so, so sweet! Aww... I might start crying now... *sniff* Awsome ^^ |
| Selena Mars 2006-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust...wow! I mean your stories reach above and beyond expectations when I read them. They are truly lovely and I wish only the best. I hope that you can still do Beautiful Darkness because I am craving for more. This story did make me cry. Keep up the good work! |
| Artemis-Delilah-Avari 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. If you made Sandra Evans cry, you have a good story. This was really good. Sad, but good. |
| Sandra Evans 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI bawled like a baby. I'm not sure whther I should strangle you or add you to my Favorite Author's list. |
| Sugi 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWAH! Seriously... so sad, but so beautiful... :( |
| Hangman By Cent 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseHA! *breathless from running* i got here first! lol i already told you this, but this is a lovely, tear-jerkey oneshot featuring our fav characters and a new addition to the family. two thumbs WaY up! ^_^ |