aw. well this is nice thing to read first thing in the morning- er -afternoon o.O;; i like it

Good job.

AH why a cliffhanger?

I love it! ^.^ so kawaii and well written!

(big eyes) Aw!

I like it! ~.^ I'm looking forward to more, and I can't wait to see where you take this. :3

Came in via lj.

Hee! What a fun read!

*hopped over from the hikaruxkaoru livejournal comm*

Hitachiincest !! Personally I really enjoyed this fic! =D Somehow I like the idea of a slightly more seme Hikaru, and the use of cigarette to symbolise a rebellious approach even though Hikaru wasn't a very experienced smoker was well done. Thank you very much for sharing and I hope to enjoy more Hitachiincest from you! ^^"

btw, *added to faves*

Tell me there's a chapter 2. I want to know about Kaoru's plan. I love the personality you gave the twins. Especially Hikaru.

What, no twincest? Aw...

No, I'm kidding. Not all fics need hot bodies grinding together to be good ^_- I think this is a good look at their relationship with each other, showing that they really do have their individual personalities, even though they're commonly lumped together as a single entity.

I loved how this fic was able to show the individual personality of each twin in such a clear way.^^ I think you did very well with characterization. Go you! ^^ Thanks so much for making this.

nice ficcie!^_^

This is such a great fic.
Enjoyed it so much! ^ ^

Aw! Wicked awesome! Not only is the writing style nice and clean (something often hard to find on these days...), but the plotline and depth is also wicked awesome! For a fic of this size I didn't think beforehand that it'd turn out like this, but I rather enjoyed reading it a lot. Keep it up! ^__^

oh man, i'm really loving this so far! your writing style is really fresh and crisp (sounds like i'm describing lettuce or something, ._.) and it's really interesting reading a fic where the twins are perceived as very different even by the people surrounding them. i hope you continue soon. :)