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Reviews for: The Next Generation
Daria93
2006-07-21 . chapter 4
I love this story!
This is the best story about the Golden Trios kids I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
Linda Walnut
2006-07-21 . chapter 4
/cheer! (warcraft habbit, sorry)
keep going this is that page i read while you werent looking!
i mean... /walks away whistling
RHrJamJavaJunkiePrincess2010
2006-07-21 . chapter 4
OMG! You're not continuing it? It's really good...and it's got real potential. Ah, well. It was good while it lasted...

much love from Emma

"You're making absolutely no sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow
Linda Walnut
2006-07-19 . chapter 3
hehe
keep going!
RHrJamJavaJunkiePrincess2010
2006-07-19 . chapter 3
The story's still really good, and I like both of the songs that you used. Please keep going!

much love from Emma

"You're making absolutely no sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow
FancyNewWeasley
2006-07-18 . chapter 3
:) aww cute. i approve. its basically how i picture it too. :)
RHrJamJavaJunkiePrincess2010
2006-07-18 . chapter 2
I liked it. I always like the stories of Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione's kids going to Hogwarts. This one has promise, please keep going! The only suggestion I have is to have the paragraphs spaced. It's all kind of lumped together which makes it slightly harder to read as a conversation. Are you double spacing it? Besides that, very good job!

much love from Emma

"You're making absolutely no sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow
Linda Walnut
2006-07-18 . chapter 2
jesse is... well jesse is a lot of things...
keep going its getting good!
Linda Walnut
2006-07-12 . chapter 1
i remember this! but you wouldnt let me read the other pages =(
update soon so that i can finally read the rest darn it! =)
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