 Daria93 2006-07-21 . chapter 4I love this story!
This is the best story about the Golden Trios kids I've ever read. Keep up the good work! |
 Linda Walnut 2006-07-21 . chapter 4/cheer! (warcraft habbit, sorry)
keep going this is that page i read while you werent looking!
i mean... /walks away whistling |
 RHrJamJavaJunkiePrincess2010 2006-07-21 . chapter 4OMG! You're not continuing it? It's really good...and it's got real potential. Ah, well. It was good while it lasted...
much love from Emma
"You're making absolutely no sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow |
 Linda Walnut 2006-07-19 . chapter 3hehe
keep going! |
 RHrJamJavaJunkiePrincess2010 2006-07-19 . chapter 3The story's still really good, and I like both of the songs that you used. Please keep going!
much love from Emma
"You're making absolutely no sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow |
 FancyNewWeasley 2006-07-18 . chapter 3:) aww cute. i approve. its basically how i picture it too. :) |
 RHrJamJavaJunkiePrincess2010 2006-07-18 . chapter 2I liked it. I always like the stories of Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione's kids going to Hogwarts. This one has promise, please keep going! The only suggestion I have is to have the paragraphs spaced. It's all kind of lumped together which makes it slightly harder to read as a conversation. Are you double spacing it? Besides that, very good job!
much love from Emma
"You're making absolutely no sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow |
 Linda Walnut 2006-07-18 . chapter 2jesse is... well jesse is a lot of things...
keep going its getting good! |
 Linda Walnut 2006-07-12 . chapter 1i remember this! but you wouldnt let me read the other pages =(
update soon so that i can finally read the rest darn it! =) |