 Raikim4never 2009-04-15 . chapter 8Dude, I wish I was Lu! And I read Animorphs! This is one of the coolest fics, EVA! |
 D.J. Scales 2007-03-23 . chapter 6Um yeah the emotional meltdown just sums all of Luiza's anger up right now. Now i understand why Rai had been made the leader after the time after time issue because he has a strong heart and a strong will not to mention that Dashi was a dragon of wind before him so it makes some poetic sense in a way. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-03-23 . chapter 9The whole makeout session between Rai and Lu was way too much information but still well written. By the way, I'm writing a fourth story to the triqual to this story so please check it out and help me in any way possible. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-03-23 . chapter 8Nice having Lu agree to be Rai's girlfriend and for the record marrage laws are eighteen in some states so Lu would be able to be Rai's wife in about 2 years. One More Thing, I noticed some references to Sprited Away and Animorphs and you matched them up nicely. Any chance of asking Kaliann on wheater or not i should write a sequel to the quest for the 12 keyblades because i have no idea on how to proceed from that point. |
 D.J. Scales 2007-02-26 . chapter 1Man Dojo eats like a pig until no tommorow. Now i understand why Master Fung rarely leaves the Xiaolin Temple. |
 David113666 2006-12-22 . chapter 5Cool. |
 dragon of spirits 2006-12-14 . chapter 9Srry about how late this review is, I really love this and u have to update soon!
dragon of spirits |
 mdizzle 2006-12-02 . chapter 9^_^ glad to see you've taken my suggestion. Okay now for my advice...make Jack louder lol. But all in all pretty good. Now I'll hear from ya soon |
 dragon of spirits 2006-11-27 . chapter 8Okay,I have so much to say
1) Rai's evil!OH NO! A and Lu is also evil! NO! And all the warriors are evil! NONONO!
2) Wuya is now his mother! OMG!
3)LU rox! so does rai! (even evil)
4) THIS STORY ROX SO UPDATE SOON! ... yeh thats it! |
 mdizzle 2006-11-26 . chapter 8hm...very intriguing. Keep going with this.
Is it just me or is 1500 a very popular number in that show? |
 Mr Makulu 2006-11-25 . chapter 8Hmm, so now everyone's evil, lets see how this turns out. I wonder what they did to get Clay to turn maybe they offered him baby back ribs (hm baby back ribs). So is Kimiko also part of the Family or is it only Rai and Lu? So if every one is evil and evolved into their final form (except Rai) who is gonna save every one? Ok thats enough questions please update soon I want to know more. |
 mdizzle 2006-10-26 . chapter 7Sorry if you thought I was snapping at you in the review reply but I was just joking around. Anyways, I've just had a really bad day today so i'm in a bit of a foul mood. Well onto business, I'm glad you finally made Rai evil and you do a very creative job of that city. |
 Mr Makulu 2006-10-19 . chapter 7This is a really good chapter, i like how your making Wuya and her family seem a bit more human while still being believable. Update soon I want to know more.
Mr Makulu |
 firesandstorm 2006-10-16 . chapter 7 Excellante' as always! |
 Jeannette Yu 2006-09-21 . chapter 6 wow...Lu is very emotional...but i really like your story anyway and please continue writeing. Sorry for any typos i made or will make and im sorry for not revuiewing earlier. Kepp up the good work and long chapters and i want to wish you good luvck! and if i had to rate this story with 10 being 'fantastic' i would give u a 10! |