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| Stella Taylor16 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abusecool story. i glad that sara and catherine are back keep on writing the great stories |
| Shayna15 2006-09-30 ch 3, | abuseso good jess i am like speachless. i didnt want to stop reading it so i read the whole thing in an hour. lol. i am only gonna review for like the last chap k it easier i can put all wat i feel in one little thing. lol. but ya they end up together that is so cool. but catherine and warick didnt. they will sooner or later "not careing for his wife tina" lol. great line. damn then dancing i know you loved that. lol. peace. hunn. |
| CSIfan3 2006-08-07 ch 3, | abuseWow that was good and interesting. I'm glad they got Sara and Catherine back. good job. |
| El Gringo Loco 2006-07-25 ch 3, | abuseA good little story, could easily have doubled as an episode have been from a 1960's spy show. (I liked several of them in first run.) Strange how the bad guys never quite say through the good ones cover. And Spider was right up there with some of the worst of them. Add Grissom as the bumbling hero and Brass as the cavalry. And it had all the right elements. And oh yes - the bad guys got in the end. Loved Grissom admitting that at least one bug deserved to get squashed. |
| myfairlady 2006-07-15 ch 3, | abusethat was super awsome you ahould right more stories like that! i loved it your a great writer! keep writing! myfairlady |
| dark-girl-faith-sidle 2006-07-15 ch 3, | abuseLOVE the update :) i'm glad they got Sara and Catherine back :) |
| Cherrydrops12 2006-07-15 ch 3, | abusethat was.. |
| all things must end. 2006-07-14 ch 3, | abuseWow, this is asinine. |
| miss fancy 2006-07-14 ch 2, | abusemore! can u please update soon? =P i really enjoy this story. |
| dark-girl-faith-sidle 2006-07-14 ch 2, | abuseLove the update, just hope that Grissom knows what he's doing |
| CSigurlie07 2006-07-14 ch 2, | abuseoh, write more soon! |
| SaraStar 2006-07-14 ch 2, | abuseThis is really exciting. Please post more soon, I can't wait to read what happens next. |
| Cherrydrops12 2006-07-13 ch 2, | abuseawesome |
| Lyanna Stark 2006-07-13 ch 2, | abuseMoremoremoremoremoremore! Please? |
| myfairlady 2006-07-13 ch 2, | abusethis is very good. i love it i hope you update soon. so this is no pairing. just about sara and cath's friend relationship? well its very good can't wait for the major action/suspense part! update ASAP! myfairlady |