Woot! I am on a Luv2Game spree!

No, ahem, really though. I wanted to read this since one, I friggin' LOVE Auron and almost screamed with joy when I saw him in KH2, and two, because it helps my goldfish memory since I plan to write a KH/FFx/2 story soon. So, technically, you are my FFX/2 senpai!

Anyway, grammar wise, there's a few typos, but if you're anything like me, you'll say, damn I wrote this forever ago and I'm too lazy to fix it. And if you are like me, then that explains why we're friends, right? I really like Yuna being compared to that destroyed pillar in Zanarkand (I hope I spelled that right lol). I thought that was clever. And I really like how you worked that whole, Auron, father sort of figure or at least that's how he rubbed off on me. To me, it was clear he was offering Rikku advise as one who's felt her pain before and wanted to offer wise words, rather than one who wanted to comfort her as a potential lover. I can picture Auron doing what he did. And I really like that you brought out Rikku's sincere feelings because she's usually super spunky and at times, annoys the heck out of me, but when she winds down, I find her likable. And you worked this scene into the storyline of the game so it feels like it could have really happened. Stories like that are the best. XD

Anyway, nicely done and thanks for feeding my Auron love. :3

Hey, great story. It's tender and touching but not to the point that it's outright fluffy and really reaching. Well, to make a short story abrupt: I like it. I can really picture everything you described quite well. At the beginning where you described the structure in Zanarkand I could see Rikku sitting there and watching as sort of dream-like figures marched around her, oblivious to her as she was oblivious to them

I don't know if that's what you intended, but it was really effective and lovely. Well done.

There's a few typos (like "deed" instead of "dead", and "Zandarkand" isntead of "Zanarkand", but they're just typos. Read it over and you'll spot them). Not a huge problem, but I just thought I'd let you know. Hope you don't mind.

Anyway, thanks so much for you review. I'm really thrilled that you enjoyed my story! Your story here is definitely fab. and I like the relationship you created between Auron and Rikku. Keep writing! :) - oi

_ Muy well-written! _ ...too bad they didn't have this in the game; it would have made it even more...smexy. XD

Um.. well, Rikku should be happy when she later realizes that the summoner, and everyone else, shall live.

Except for Auron.

And Tidus.

And Yuna as we all knew her. (remember FFX-2? o_O)

so, yes. Seriously, you did a very good job with this...and, somehow you seem familiar... -shrugs-

I'm also going to see if I can read some other fics of yours. _

Aww very sweet, and very well done! I don't know how I missed this one before, Chibi-Sorrow told me about it and I came looking. You did a very nice job keeping them ic too. Rikku being sad and Auron giving advise and comfort, however cryptic it might be. Gin

Awe that was a nice little one shot. I liked it.

WOW! You were right. I did like it! No no no love it is more like it. hehe that sound weird. I love how you compared Yuna to the pillar. It made me feel sad, and it made perfect sense. I never really considered it like that before, it made me feel like why in the heck would Yunie do such a thing. And the detail... WOW I love your writing. SUPER DE DUPER! INCREDIBLE! WONDERFUL! GREAT! 5 STARS! You get it!

bluemoon fairy

This was smexy. *walks away* *comes back* oh...you need more? lol

I liked it...well written... and of course, i'm freaking angsty now, so it hit the heart. *acts all dramatic* I SHOULD be working on my ficcie but uh... *looks innocent* I liked how Rikku was sad but she listened to Auron's wisdom... It was very nicely written... made me sniffle. And of course "She coulnd't really see Auron crying about ANYTHING" . heh heh... *grins* lol. And Auron is like a shadow...who... . sorry...

But I was hoping that you'd say where the hell his scar came from..cause I'm sorry. I have NO idea how he got it. From the spell Yunalesca sent him maybe? I'll assume that cause.. His sword didn't cut him...

Lets just say the spell. o_O

Anyway, great fic, (*cough update even though I'm a hypocrite cough*) and talk to you soon!

AF

That was a good little oneshot. I liked it.