dont worry i love this couple! to me ichigo/rukia just doesnt work, I also love your fanfic. You're doing a great job!

wow love this i also loose hope in them cause of the overwhelming numbers of ichiruki fans can u please make a fanfic about rukia and renji in high school with drama and romance and a bit of ichihime without the ss and arancar arc and stuff just regular life i would do it but i dont know how

I agree Ichigo and Orhime are cute together. They balance each other well and I love how you wrote their interaction here.

yay there is a gate. right the next one... this is just so cute and halarios at the same time(I still can't spell my way out of a wet brown paper bag). I will continue to read if you continue to write.

i waited two years for u to update..please updatew i want to see what happen

Why would you want to stop those thoughts? This is good stuff! Btw you were right about the gates that connect the worlds. Also, the way you made Ikkaku act nervous in the scene with Yachiru seemed out of character. I don't remember him ever being scared in the series, I think he'd act more annoyed. (This is only in case you ever plan to use him again.)

very funny.

I loved the 1st 3 chapters. Chapter 5, seemed like it didn't fit. 3 ended with Renji confessing his feelings then the next thing you kno have mission to go to...though I'm interested in reading what happens on the mission I wanted more...romance fluff ect not sure I'm wording it right... other than I loved, loved 1-3 their converasion and Renji feeling and thoughts liked how you wrote it, to me was perfect..

lmao!

I love that bit so much!

I have to say.. there's something extremely annoying about reading a fanfic that's written in first person...

However, other then that minor gripe, i loved it. Good job

HAHAHAHA! This is funny! and awesome!

Yeah, I know what you mean when you start with soomething small, and then ideas just keep coming out. But, you're actually making good use of yours! (I just go to bed and forget about it when that happens to me XD)

Keep up the good work!

Renji X Rukia FOREVER! (and Ichigo x Orihime)

hehehe I love it!

Finally! Another Renji x Rukia fan! So much better than Rukia x Ichigo...

I agree...

I LURV IchiHime, RenjiRuki and HitsuHina...

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-Dont look at me like that...LOL

THIS ROX! i was laughing so hard! i love this writing style, and i fully support renjixrukia!

OMIGOSH I cant WAIT 4 u to update!

so do it soon! D

pearla