 Fallen-Princess 2006-08-12 . chapter 5is that the end of the story? |
 ravendarkness 2006-08-03 . chapter 5i love this story. you r a very good writer. keep up the good work. i cant wait to read the next chapter. you should make captain jack say something really funny about will and becka's relationship. |
 Vertigo Showgirl(notsignedin) 2006-07-21 . chapter 4 Another great chapter! cant wait to read more! |
 VertigoShowgirl(not signed in) 2006-07-21 . chapter 3 lol. good chapter. off to read the rest!
~EMZ~ |
 Unintended Harmony 2006-07-19 . chapter 2Good chapter! off to read the rest! |
 Unintended Harmony 2006-07-19 . chapter 5I WANT MORE! great chappie. xoxo
-Your annoyer and lover,
Emma |
 Emma 2006-07-17 . chapter 4 Hey, I just barely got around to reading ur story because I like the W/OC pairing and this one is one of the few there are. I have read the few stories and this one is one of my favorites because so far it has good detailing and storyline. Update soon please. I can't wait to see how this story develops. |
 -JackIsBack-2007- 2006-07-16 . chapter 4Well written chapter! I hope to read more. . . If you update I promise to keep reviewing. |
 i-want-cheese 2006-07-15 . chapter 1awsome i luv it |
 soarineaglewings 2006-07-13 . chapter 2oh...the plot thickens...i like it still...update soon
Lauren |
 -JackIsBack-2007- 2006-07-13 . chapter 2Another great chapter! I hope to read some more very soon! |
 -JackIsBack-2007- 2006-07-13 . chapter 1Great first chapter! Please write more! |
 Mixed-Signals 2006-07-13 . chapter 1Hmm. I'm liking where this is going. Deffinitely looking forward to reading more. Keep it up. :) |
 soarineaglewings 2006-07-12 . chapter 1oh...i like it-very reLISTIC...update soon
Lauren |
 HyperSquishy 2006-07-12 . chapter 1O! That sounds great! I want to interrupt Will and Elizabeth's wedding! O! O! Pick me! Anywho, I hope you update again soon, it's quite intriguing! |