This is an excellent story!

I noticed that the last update was a year and half ago. Please update soon. This is too good to be abandoned and Tidus should finally get that kiss from Rikku and vice verse!

Eagerly await another update!

Ganz gut. So close! Brother always gets in the way.

sweet story, as for ur request for ideas, how about u chuck in a 'disturbance' outside where seymore and yuna are (the disturbance is a fright between the al bhed and the guado), and go from there

only a suggestion, i know it sucks
anyway keep it up

Argh, you evil bastard. That was just mean. But now Tidus will try to get the kiss he's owed, without Brother catching on. And Rikku won't worry about who Tidus likes.

Either one of them has plenty of chances to tease the other now. I'm sure Rikku can find her inner seductress.

Yay Tikku. Keep up the great work! =)

Man I love your story a LOT...! I Hope you will update it until the end! (please please! ) I dont think I will be able to help you unfortunatly because it's very difficult to me to write correctly in english (as you can see) By the way This chapter was really good! I will wait for every chapter with impatience!! You are absolutely amazing dude!

Good luck!

great chap

I absolutely adored that chapter! Very cute and I'm really looking forward to your next update. :)

Yeah! Good job.

Another nice chapter.Hope to see more soon.

Great chapter. I loved the Tidus/Rikku moment. It must be so weird to see Yuna, but know she's not the Yuna he knew. None of his friends will be, I guess. I wonder if Rikku and him will collide into them eventually. Please update soon.

good chapter. i look forward to your next update.
well lets see there going to the ice temple not sure if they well kill seymour or not, also i'm guessing after they get yuna outside the ice temple they will go back with brother and save home and then they could take the airship to break in to the temple in bevelle or yuna other group (A&W&L) could show up outside the ice temple then when the ice break and they will fall below and talk for a little then end up in the desert like in the game, when they get to the desert you could keep yuna in the group and they could all go to defend home and save it or take off on the airship like in the game. if yuna isn't in the desert with them, they can go save her after they save home, then go save yuna in bevelle and tidus could help them get out of bevelle with his knowledge of will happen.some more tidus/rikku stuff. also i still want to see if auron remembers and if he doesn't well tidus make auron believe him with some of his knowledge of things that haven't happen yet. that's it for ideas not sure if any of them can be usefu.

Godd job, keep up the good work!

great chapter

Cute chapter. Too bad she was kinda confused. Yay Tikku!

More fluff! Keep up the great work. =)

I thought it was written pretty well. Very interesting. I'm very curious to see what happens next. Please update soon.